Great stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep writing, it's a great story.
Great story! I feel like the song "I loved her first" would've went well with Ron's conversation With Mr. Granger. Will there be more chapters?
Well you left that on a very depressing note, but I still am adding it to my favourites! I know why yoou made Hermione's dad have brain cancer, not every thing can be all happy- go-lucky. Please up-date soon! And take care.
Oh wow. I was on the verge of tears. This is so sad but a splendid story in all so far. Please update soon because I can't wait for more!
Ohmygoodness. I just read every chapter and please please please write the next one soon! You're a fantastic writer.
I can totally understand why this was a hard chapter to write. I think this is a definite turning point for Ron and Hermione's relationship. As for Harry and Ginny, I think they'll make good parents and, in time, so will Ron and Hermione. Can't wait for the next update!
i love this story next pls!!!
Leaves me stunned, every time I read it...can't imagine something like this...you're the best on MNFF.
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wasn't Harry rich because of his parents and godgathers inheritance what happened to that
Gosh, this chapter is awfully sad. I barely read it and I wouldn't have the guts to write it. You know, often when I read 'Till I Die', I really admire you and your works. Keep it on&on&on, Martin.
Wow. The writing here is incredible! I love how believable you've made everything and how you've injected your own imagination into this story while, at the same time, maintaining the charm of the canon series. I just went through this non-stop, from the first chapter to this one, and I am completely impressed! I can't wait to read more!
u r really tallented. congratulations. u really shoud write a book someday.
It was hard to read, too. I don't even want to think of the day I tell my father goodbye forever. It was hard enough to say goodbye for now when I moved into my college dorm. Good chapter. Again, sad, but good.
This is such a sad chapter. It's good, though.
Aww... That's awesome about George and Angelina. So amazing. It's nice that Ron has a ring with so much meaning, too.
I haven't heard that song, but woohoo Owl City! Great chapter. I like the baby shower talk!
