Reviews For Finding Her Voice
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/18/10 8:23
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

I figured Harper was going to have to be really pissed off at Blaise to start talking. While this alone shouldn't have really pissed her off it was a number of things building up, especially learning that Wilkes had found her and that Blaise kept calling her "Red." I'm glad the Potters are there to witness her voice coming back. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yep, the voice is back :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/17/10 15:44
Chapter: I Hate Love

i'm wondering when this poor couple will finally get together. I guess they have to go slowly. For all of his suave appearance, Blaise doesn't seem to have had much experience with females. I wonder if it will take something traumatic for Harper to learn how to talk. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I like to go slowly, I'm afraid :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/17/10 9:05
Chapter: Fred and Ginger

I wonder what secrets are safe with Nott. They didn't stay at the ball for very long. It sounds like Jimmy has a big mouth. Their dresses sounded beautiful. I can see Harper in green. I'm sure she turned heads. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Jimmy does indeed have a big mouth :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/16/10 12:35
Chapter: Kisses in the Library

Blaise's mother seems impressed with Harper. I hope they straighten some things out before they go to the ball, otherwise Blaise will be jealous through the whole thing. I wonder if he'll be able to get her to talk. I wonder what it will take. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/15/10 12:25
Chapter: My Name's Blaise, And I'm A Recovering Slytherin

Of all times for Blaise's mother to show up--but I know she had to:D I was waiting for them to kiss. If his mother has her way they'll be together in no time. It was funny to watch Blaise's jealous reaction at the support group. It's too bad that Harper won't talk to Bilbo because I think it would be easier to teach him to read if she would talk. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Jealousy's always fun to do :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/14/10 12:41
Chapter: Fallen Snow Angels

Well, that was creepy to have someone standing outside the window watching Harper. I wonder if it's the nasty squib relative. I'll bet Blaise isn't used to being left out of a lot of things like he was at the Potters' dinner conversation. Harper's fun in the snow was delightful. I used to like to dance in the snow and the moonlight:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Blaise will learn a lot in this story, one hopes :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/11/10 21:02
Chapter: Starving Her Out

The thought of a very powerful young witch having to escape from her therapist the old fashioned way was very creative and pretty funny. I suspected it was Malfoy coming to visit early in the chapter. I didn't expect him to be so pitiful. You are doing such a good job with this story. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ta :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/11/10 18:47
Chapter: These Feelings That I Feel

I can't wait to see who's waiting for Blaise in the hall. I am struck by how young Harper acts. I'm almost thinking she's acting like she's in her early teens rather than 20, except for her physical reaction to Blaise. I am really enjoying this story so far. I really have no idea what happens other than the general description you provided for Jemzi. I want to enjoy the journey of this story and I think it will be a great ride. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I would encourage reading Jemzi afterwards, as there is plenty more stuff going on there :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/11/10 17:16
Chapter: Blaise Zabini

I suppose they could cast a quick body bind and stop Harper. I don't know why I'm giggling right now. Just the picture of Blaise looking out the window at Harper and her running off at just that moment. I can't wait to find out more about Harper and hear what McGonagall has to say. Great chapter.

Author's Response: It is meant to be quite funny, glad you like the chapter :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/11/10 11:42
Chapter: Harper Riley

Excellent start. I was watching your current story for a while and wanted to read it but I thought I'd read this one first. Harper is certainly intriguing. I was afraid she'd run away before meeting everyone. I hope she stays around and lets someone help her. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! Guess you kinda know how this will end, because of the sequel, but it should entertain nonetheless. Kepp up the R&R ing :D

Reviewer: Lovegood-x
Date: 04/09/10 9:52
Chapter: Harper Riley

Great story, only on chapter 12 so far, but i'm going to read it all as soon as im back from holiday ;) I'm guessing the sequel is 'Jemzi'? I read that before this one. Oops xD

Author's Response: That doesn't matter. Enjoy the rest of the story when you get around to it :D

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/06/10 12:42
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

awwwww!!! what a great ending! nice job! :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. Sequel's first chapter is up :P

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 02/04/10 8:36
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

Loved it!!! So it's Jemzi, Patrick, Nicholas and Gigi! Nice!

Awesome story overall. Just wished I hadn't taken so long to finish it.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! And the sequel is now up, woot!! :D

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 02/04/10 8:24
Chapter: My Actions Speak Louder Than Your Words

First off, let me apologize for taking such a long time to read and review, got caught up in exams and stuff, really sorry.
Anyway...what a cliffhanger!!!!! Fortunately I can read the next chapter straight away.

Author's Response: Yep. Enjoy :P

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 01/29/10 18:09
Chapter: Harper Riley

By the way, I was almost crying myself when Blaise did in the previous chapter, you described it so beautifully...
And how many kids do they actually have in the end?

Author's Response: Four kids, who will all be in the sequel. So glad you liked the story :D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 01/29/10 18:03
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

Oh, I love that story! So sad it's finished...
Can't wait for the sequel =)

Author's Response: Sequel will be up soon, I promise :D

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 01/26/10 3:41
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

:D looking forward to a sequel.

Author's Response: It'll be up pretty darn soon :D

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 01/23/10 19:31
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

i LOVED this story! now i'm not sure what i'm gonna read!! D:

Author's Response: Read the sequel, it'll be up soon :P

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 01/23/10 19:20
Chapter: My Actions Speak Louder Than Your Words

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i knew it was all too good to be true!!! can't wait to read the ending!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 01/18/10 19:10
Chapter: When You Say Nothing At All

In the middle, after she started speaking, it got a little dull but then it picked back up again. Over all it was a mpretty awsome story.

I love Red, shes just so fiery, which is kind of the point. She's got a lot off sas and is a really strong female character.

Zabini is great. He's so nice and torturesd but he still has little features that remind you he is a slytherin. All you're slytherins are like that, they're likeable but they still behave like slytherins.

Finaly we get to this chapter! I thought this was one of the best chapters and I enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to seeing your Albus play out because normaly he's the good one and James is the wild one. Also, that ending line was perfect. Excellent.

Author's Response: I have interesting plans for Albus, hopefully stuff that's never been tried before :)

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