Reviews For Finding Her Voice
Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 08/31/09 16:29
Chapter: Fred and Ginger

Oh Blaise, that silly boy. He shouldn't be afraid of rejection at all.

I have a feeling I'm not going to like Nott very much, am I right?

Author's Response: Nope! And Jimmy Peakes is a reincarnation of Gregor Holmwood. Mwahaha!!! ;-)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/29/09 1:01
Chapter: Fred and Ginger

Now i'm thoroughly confused.. D:
excellent part about Fred there... that was nicely done.
I like Jimmy Peakes. :3
I was SO excited to see this updated you have no idea!!!

Author's Response: LOL Would u rather Harper end up with Jimmy rather than Blaise? The spat between Blaise and Nott will be explained in the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 08/25/09 10:39
Chapter: Kisses in the Library

FINALLY! This is what we've been waiting for! The kiss was beautifully written of course. I loved the way that it sort of built up, the tension between them, and then it finally broke, and it was beautiful and wonderful and made me smile. :D

I really like Blaise's mother. You have this gift for taking character's who nobody has ever really cared about or kind of looked over and just making them completely wonderful.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. And I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing as much, I just started school and have been really busy, but I have to make time for my favorite author.

Aras

Author's Response: I started school yesterday...I feel your pain. I'm so glad you liked this chapter...next one soon ;-)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/21/09 22:56
Chapter: Kisses in the Library

"She took her own food and ate in silence. "
That made me LOL. of course she did :P
btw, when I saw this was updated I SQUEED and clicked right away! I LOVE THIS STORYYY!!! :D
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OMG OMG OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! This is beautifully written, the romance part :) .< Just something to think about.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Next chapter soon :-)

Reviewer: Amanda Vega
Date: 08/21/09 16:36
Chapter: Kisses in the Library

Great chapter - the one we've been waiting for, heh! I love Blaise's mother's reaction to her. We never really hear much about her, and your version of the character is very real and tangible, something I expect must be hard to achieve when most of we know about her is the fact that all of her husbands have 'mysteriously' died! You've managed to weave a very complex and yet very realistic personality onto a character we know little about [;

One small nitpick - in the last line, 'of' should be 'off.'

Can't wait to see what Leonard does next, personally, hehe.

Author's Response: I do love a villain. I always imagined Mrs Zabini as a cheerful and charismatic murderess. Keep up the R&R ing. :-)

Reviewer: fruitandextranutcase
Date: 08/21/09 16:06
Chapter: Harper Riley

Ohmigod, ohmigod, ohmigod, those two drive me CRAZY! (Yeah, I've been reading this for a while and loving every moment. :P) Why won't they just admit their undying love for one another?!?!?!?! And more importantly, why doesn't Blaise love ME?!?!

Sorry, I'm getting kind of overexcited. I already can't wait for the next update. :D

Author's Response: LOL, Blaise Zabini fan? You've read MTT, you knw the drill! :-)

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 08/14/09 19:14
Chapter: My Name's Blaise, And I'm A Recovering Slytherin

i LOVE this story!! its so good - this is my first time reviewing tho- i love how you transition from blaise to harper's minds and how every chapter is something interesting and not all fluff. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, the next chapter's in the queue. Keep reading and reviewing :-)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 2:35
Chapter: My Name's Blaise, And I'm A Recovering Slytherin

SO CLOSE!!!
Argh.... I loved the description of that dance :') extraordinary!
I am really enjoying this fic at this early hour of 3:30 AM... I'm gonna keep reading and reviewing for sure :)
Keep it up!!
-Tine

Author's Response: Thanks, I will. Keep up the R&R ing. :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I will. Keep up the R&R ing. :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I will. Keep up the R&R ing. :D

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 2:21
Chapter: Fallen Snow Angels

OOOOoohhh boooy!! how very delightingly creeperish!! >:]
'Amazing,’ whispered Hermione.

Yes, thought Blaise. She is.
That made me go: *melt* aweeeeeeeeeee *SQUEE!*

Well done. This is great! I'm liking it more and more :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Yeah, I need to remind everyone that there is a real villain lurking around. :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 1:52
Chapter: Starving Her Out

‘She does not eat until she comes out and joins me, understand?’
I ROFLd at that :P Beauty and the Beast, anyone?? XD
sorry :P
I like how he calls her Red. It reminds me of this one tv show from where I'm from called Naturally Sadie, and how the guy who has a crush on her calls her Red. It's cute, I like it and it suits Blaise well.

Author's Response: Ha! I'm glad someone picked up on the beauty and the beast homage. :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 1:37
Chapter: These Feelings That I Feel

Great again :) It'll be neat to find out what'd really going on inside Harper's head :) I'm really interested in phsycology and how people think and feel and deal with emotions. You've really got a lot of it done really well. I can pretty much feel with Harper, and even sort of understand her. If only Blaise was a Legimens... he should probably invest in some Occlumency lessons, no? ;)

Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, it would make things a lot easier. :-)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 1:19
Chapter: Blaise Zabini

This is quite good. A very very original plotline, i might add ;)
I'm not too keen on Bilbo's name though.... it just reminds me of the Hobbit, and I think that there can only be one Bilbo :P

Author's Response: I forgot about the Hobbit until it was too late. :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/14/09 0:43
Chapter: Harper Riley

This sounds interesting!
I'll be glad to know how things pan out. This has the makings of a great plot ahead of it! Good on you :)
Now there are a few grammatical nitpicks that I'd like to point out for my own peace of mind :P When you say things like: Harry asked, jerkily, falling into a seat. I would suggest taking out one of the commas to make it flow better, because the number of comma leads to a vast amount of pausing, making it more broken to read. Also, the reader doesn't exactly know what Harry is doing that is jerky. The way you have written it could mean that he is talking jerkily, or he is jerkily sitting down. I would suggest taking out the comma either before, or after the word, depending on how you intended it to be interpreted :) This also applies to a couple other places I caught, but this is the one that stood out the most. I'd check over that if I were you.
Also, you seem to have Ron cast as sort of daft or just always needing reprimanding or being told things without using big words. Be careful, because this is a trap that many authors fall into when writing Ron. Just be wary to stick more to the book Ron, rather than the way Rupert Grint portrays Ronnikins.
Otherwise, that's about it! :) I enjoyed and I'll be on the lookout for more!
Cheerio!! --Tine

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :-)

Reviewer: hermione_lily_ginny_luna
Date: 08/13/09 1:33
Chapter: My Name's Blaise, And I'm A Recovering Slytherin

please update fast!! i mean, i normally don't read fics like this... about characters that weren't central to jkr's plot... but this is great!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it and reviewed. Next chapter soon, keep up the R&R ing. :D

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 08/12/09 11:33
Chapter: My Name's Blaise, And I'm A Recovering Slytherin

Oh my gosh, I'm so sad they didn't kiss! Of course, you're a genius, because anyone reading this will be like me and be saying "oh my gosh, i can't wait for the next chapter, mabye they'll kiss then," so your readers just keep coming back for more.

I love this story! Harper is just such a brilliant character. I'm looking forward to more!

Aras

Author's Response: Ah! I love your reviews. I'm so glad you like Harper, cos it's so difficult to write someone when they refuse to speak. Next chapter's in the queue...

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 08/03/09 14:35
Chapter: Fallen Snow Angels

Oh my gosh, is the man the squib? That's very worrisome...

I love how your stories have two people that are so afraid to let the other know that they have feelings for eachother because they're afraid they'll be rejected. It's really sweet and it builds up the story so well. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I love the turmoil as well! :-)

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 07/25/09 13:50
Chapter: Starving Her Out

Wow! You've done it again! After I finished My Trouble Tyrant, I decided to read more of your stuff. This is just as good. I really like Harper's character, she's really cute and funny.

I'm looking forward to more!

Aras

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! This story's still a baby compared to MTT, so reviews mean a lot. Stay tuned :-)

Reviewer: demonicdementor
Date: 07/24/09 12:07
Chapter: Harper Riley

im already falling in love with zabini. hahahai love how you take characters people usually glimpse over and make them so much more alive. *hopes the next chapter is soon*

Author's Response: Hahaha! Glad you like. The next chapter's in the queue. This story will hopefully not be as dark as "troubled". Keep reviewing :--)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/23/09 22:16
Chapter: Blaise Zabini

‘Whatever happened to that white owl he was so wretchedly fond of?’ he muttered.

Haha. DH reference.

‘You’ve trusted people before, Harry,’ murmured Ginny.

Harry didn’t stop to consider which of the numerous examples of trust gone wrong she was referring to.

I can only think of one example of this. (The half blood prince book thing.) Are there more?

Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Poor Hedwig. As for trust, I mean like Moody/Crouch. And he never turned Tom Riddle's diary in right away.

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 07/23/09 21:54
Chapter: Harper Riley

WOW. This is a really interesting story. I've never read a story with Zabini as a main character before. I'll have to see where this leads...

Author's Response: Thanks! Please keep R&R ing :D

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