Reviews For Finding Her Voice
Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/16/09 19:55
Chapter: Chasing Cars

And I think I just might know whose painting that is!!!

So there we go again. The main characters always have to have accidents, don't they?!

Another really enjoyable chapter. I loved the part where Harper speaks without thinking and says 'she was your sister' etc. I felt it was a powerful scene, very akward too. I'm glad Andromeda's an important character in this fic. It's like all three of your fics are inter-related (though independent of each other).

WHY IS JIMMY SO ANNOYING???

Maybe the muggle who hit her was Dudley (or Vernon), that would be pretty funny.

Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Next chapter soon. And I kind of like having all my stories linked together in some way. Speaking of which, the painting should have some interesting things to say. :D

Reviewer: TM_WandStick
Date: 09/13/09 18:46
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

That was a really great chapter! I have to admit, though, I wanted Harper's first word (when she got her voice back) to be Blaise. It was excellent the way you did it, though.

Author's Response: That would have been really sweet, actually. :) So glad you liked :D

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 09/13/09 16:45
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

Hmmm.... seeing what some would consider a minor thing, but a MTT reader would consider a major thing. Both Blaise and Keedie like the corners of their partner's mouth. :)

Love this chapter. I especially liked everyone's reactions to Blaise and Harper, like Ginny being so overjoyed and Bilbo saying "about time." It made me grin.

Ok, so I can't always just heap these words of appreciation on you. I want to tell you that sometimes the transitions between Blaise and Harper aren't very good. Sometimes I can't tell who is thinking what. Maybe that can just be something for you to watch out for, but it is getting a lot better.

I'm looking forward to more!

Aras

Author's Response: The corner of the mouth is a great spot; it's intimate, but not intrusive. :) Switching viewpoints is sadly the curse of getting really into writing a scene. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 09/13/09 16:29
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

Whooo!!!!

Harper got her voice back! And soon Blaise will tell her how he feels. Ah, everything is right with the world. :D

Oh wow, now I know what I get when I don't visit this site for a few days, you have three more stories posted. It's great, but I've really got to keep up. All right, on to the next.

Author's Response: Yep. The voice is back, but I'll warn you now--things can still go wrong. :D

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/12/09 22:52
Chapter: Harper Riley

U, i just checked this out, and now I can't decide which one to read. MTT or FHV... arg, life is so hard.... great story so far!

Author's Response: It doesn't really matter which one you read first, there are no spoilers of one in the other. Though MTT is complete. :D

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/12/09 13:22
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

Haha! A 'voice' seems to be a pivotal aspect of your fics! Maybe MFF should have one too.

At least there's no obsession with it this time though!

You're right, you do have to mix up things to prevent the fic from becoming predictable.

Like I said before, there are so many possibilities with where this fic can go as you're not restricted by the HP books.

By the way, have you written the whole thing already?

Author's Response: I'm in the middle of writing the finale (oh, yes, there's a finale) so I'm very nearly done. :o)

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 09/12/09 3:30
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

And the voice comes back...nicety nice. :-D

The plot is thickening, and this chapter by chapter business is gonna drive me bonkers, lol. I'm so impatient. It just reminds me why I waited until all parts of 'The Green Mile' were released before I decided to read them.

Wonderful plot development, and it's awesome that after all Harper has been through, she hasn't lost her impish nature.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Yep. The voice is back. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/12/09 1:38
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

OMG! I hadn't really paid attention to the last part of the last line when I first read this chapter.

'...crossing her fingers...'

She's going to go looking for trouble, I just know it. Why do things have to go wrong?! They haven't already but knowing your style after MTT...

Author's Response: Because, if everything was all hunky-dory, it would get a bit dull. :)

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/11/09 23:21
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

ohh! yes yes YES!! they're FINALLY TOGETHER!! aaah soo sweet. i didnt know this chapter was up until jusst now and i read 10 earlier.. i flipped out! my sister was sitting next to me and i started to squeal and she just gave me this look... and i cant stop smiling!! this is AMAZING!!!!!! i really hate this leonard guy -_- he.will.dieeeeeeee. i will kill him if i have to ;) anything to keep Blaise and Harper alive hahahahaha. this is amazing, once again. im in looooooooooove

Author's Response: Well, Leo is meant to be hated. Sooo glad you like the story.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/11/09 20:56
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

ahah i got the chapter title
i really love this story
it's kinda weird for her to talk, but i still love it! it was the entire point of the story anyways i guess :P

Author's Response: She had to talk at some stage :) Next chapter soon!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/11/09 20:43
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

O.O
OH MY GEE
YAYY!!! That made me happy! this continues to amaze me!

Author's Response: Good! Glad you're still liking this!

Reviewer: sorrow_of_severus
Date: 09/11/09 19:41
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

Alright, I suppose I don't hate you. I wrote my previous review, submitted it, and found a new chapter waiting for me. Ah, heaven! But I do still expect frequent updates!

I liked this chapter a lot, but I admit I liked Chapter 10 better. I did of course enjoy all the Blaise/Harper in this chapter, but the best line in it probably is, "Bilbo beamed and bowed, but not before muttering something that sounded suspiciously like, “About time, too”." I think he's a lot like how Kreacher would have turned out if he lived in better circumstances.

Author's Response: Updates are pretty regular, one a week usually. Gotta love Bilbo! :D

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/11/09 19:29
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

Just remembered. This took place in the previous chapter, but what the heck!
Does Harper know she just played matchmaker with Teddy and Victoire...and that it worked?!

Author's Response: Probably not, but it's cute, no? :)

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/11/09 18:57
Chapter: Blaise n' Red

'It seemed that now Harper had her voice back, everyone else had lost theirs.' Brilliant line!

‘Hmm…this house used to be so quiet' Ha! Typical Blaise!

And Bilbo is so funny! 'About time'!

I hope we see Mrs. Zabini in the next chapter, now that Blaise and Red (OOPS) know where they stand with each other.

I'm sure, like Ginny or Harry was (I forget), that Wilkes will have backup. I mean, he's a Squib, he'll need help. Probably get somebody and promise them a split of the money. Monetary gain seems an excellent reason for him to be after her.

Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Isabella will show up soon enough! Hopefully Leo's build-up is working! :)

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/11/09 18:45
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

Wow! That was quick! Chapter 11's up as well! It look like my wish was granted! Off to read it.

Author's Response: Yeah! I had no idea the next chapter would get accepted so fast! :D

Reviewer: sorrow_of_severus
Date: 09/11/09 18:45
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

I HATE you! (Okay, not really, but still...) How could you end the chapter with such a dramatic cliffie? Of course, I'm always waiting for the next chapter of FHV, but now I simply cannot accept that I'll have to wait a whole week to read more. (It better not be more than a week!) You are a truly sadistic author.

Alright, now that I've expressed my annoyance with you for ending the chapter with such a cliffhanger, I can actually comment on the chapter itself. I really enjoyed it. The surprise party for Ron was truly sweet, especially the part with little Teddy. I think I'm really falling for Blaise (me and every other girl on the planet :P), and although I've always liked Harper, she grows on me more and more every chapter. I am oh so fond of her withering looks, something I can sympathize with from having several friends who are boys.

Another reason I "hate" you is for ending MTT, but I suppose I am glad you'll have more time to work on this story. Just be warned that I'm waiting for that second sequel...

Author's Response: MTT had to end at some stage. But I wouldn't worry, a certain character from MTT will be making an appearence in this story soon enough. :)

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 09/11/09 18:42
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! HER VOICE IS BACK!!!!!! And awesome first words too!!!

Awesome chapter!

I really liked Harper's meeting with Molly and how they both lost brothers in the two wars. I guess Molly herself probably got some fame, being the one to finish off Voldy's no 1 leuitenant.

Why doesn't Jimmy Peakes just go away?! I don't hate him that much any more. Just reread DH and he was trying to stay back and fight despite being underage so his heart's in the right place, I guess. But he's still so annoying!

Trust Ginny to give Harper a night-dress like that!

Leonard Wilkes makes Filch look like Dumbledore, and that's saying something! (I would have said 'angel' but why not Potterize everything?!)

I'm so glad her voice is finally back. It was a long time coming and I guess all that anguish and frustration was building up and she was finally able to break through. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Jimmy's nowhere near as bad as Greg, I'll tell you that now. :)

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/11/09 18:08
Chapter: Don't Call Me Red!

OHH MY GOSH! NO WAYYYYYY! SHE SPOKE?!?!?!!?! AAAH! omg omg omg i canNOT BELIEVE THIS!!!!! PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hyperventilates* omg... aaaaaaaaaaah! i love this soo much!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yep. The voice is back! :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/09/09 21:46
Chapter: I Hate Love

Oh I WILL leave a review! I just found this and was like: YAY!! :D
This was once again really well done! I'm really looking forward to see how they will progress throughout the story!!! :D

Author's Response: Some real progress will be made in the next chapter, I promise :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/09/09 21:45
Chapter: I Hate Love

Oh I WILL leave a review! I just found this and was like: YAY!! :D
This was once again really well done! I'm really looking forward to see how they will progress throughout the story!!! :D

Author's Response: :D

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