Reviews For Petrificus Totalus
Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 09/04/09 22:30
Chapter: Boy with Niffler


I LOVE SCORPIUS! Hooray, hooray....

As usual, and I can never really tell you enough, what a be-a-UTiful poem! This was from Our Little Secret, wasn't it? Wasn't it? *reads the author's note now* Ah-HA! Heeheehee. Hahaha, mwadeehadeeha! I really loved how Scorpius figured the statue also fell in love, as statues go and as far as statues can. Poetry's one of Scorpius's many talents, which makes it one of yours, too. Thank you, as ever!

Author's Response: No, thank you! You always make my day and have me smiling ear to ear...which can be painful, but you're worth it. :D

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 07/18/09 18:56
Chapter: Boy with Niffler

I like it! I liked that you put the Pygmalion reference in both Our Little Secret and this poem.

Author's Response: I wrote the poem first and then put the reference in the chapter, so thank you for liking that I tied the two together! :)

Reviewer: dreamer_girl
Date: 07/08/09 11:11
Chapter: Boy with Niffler

Aw very cute, and just what Scorpius would do while petrified; it fits him perfectly. And I love how you managed to put some very fitting mythology into it:)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for coming over to read the poem! The statue theme begged for mythology, didn't it? :D

Reviewer: multicolour_biro
Date: 06/21/09 6:33
Chapter: Boy with Niffler

it's cute. and i hope you update our little secret soon because it's making me anxious. i love all the metaphors you put in your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter starts where this one ends, so I can't wait for you to read it. :)

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