Reviews For Her War
Reviewer: Veela1112
Date: 07/27/09 18:59
Chapter: Her War

A very creative and interesting way to tell Molly's story. The last two Haiku are very touching, particularly the line "Molly's seventh son"

Reviewer: Diadem
Date: 07/17/09 12:28
Chapter: Her War

those were so sweet...but what about fred dying?

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 07/12/09 20:13
Chapter: Her War

I like it! It's very unique - usually if someone tells a story like this through poetry, it would be a ballad. I really like what you've done with the haikus, it's very striking. Unfortunately, since I have no idea what the structure is of a haiku, I can't really comment on that aspect, other than to say I think you had some strong word choices and you did a good job carrying the story through each haiku. Congrats on being a featured story! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: MorganRay
Date: 07/12/09 18:00
Chapter: Her War

I can't say I critque poems very well, but these were very sweet snippets of Molly's personality. They really show how loyal she is to her children and family.

Reviewer: TheManagement
Date: 07/07/09 10:14
Chapter: Her War

That was brilliant! Your poetry was beautiful!

Reviewer: Colores
Date: 06/15/09 18:41
Chapter: Her War

The second to last haiku was my favorite. Nice job!

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 06/15/09 18:03
Chapter: Her War

Hannah! God, what a beautiful poem. The final battle (last three stanzas) part is what gives me goose bumps, even after four reads. Also, I never even considered how lonely Molly must feel with all of her children gone and her husband working constantly. I always picture her surrounded by her family, and you brought a brand new perspective of her to me.

I also like how you showed us that this was Molly's own battle. She had so much to fight for, and Voldemort was threatening the most important things in her life. People forget just how amazing Molly Weasley is. :)

Author's Response: thanks, Ange. :]]

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