Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 04/05/10 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 2

Another chapter? Pweeeze? It's a good story with a crapload of potential. You just need to finish it!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 01/25/10 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 2

Interesting concept. I've worked with similar themes before, but never to this extreme. I like the way you used Peter's viewpoint for the second chapter, since he's one of the characters we hear the least from. Keep it coming!

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 06/27/09 6:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it. The title really drew me in and the writing is very good though I would work on making your paragraphs a little longer. To me it just adds depth to a story. Good plot! I see potential.

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