Another chapter? Pweeeze? It's a good story with a crapload of potential. You just need to finish it!
Interesting concept. I've worked with similar themes before, but never to this extreme. I like the way you used Peter's viewpoint for the second chapter, since he's one of the characters we hear the least from. Keep it coming!
I liked it. The title really drew me in and the writing is very good though I would work on making your paragraphs a little longer. To me it just adds depth to a story. Good plot! I see potential.