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Name: The_Real_Hermione (Signed) · Date: 08/20/10 18:44 · For: Dragons
Nice story :). I loved the Tolkien quotes, they tied in really well, and the way Fleur used that as a mantra was great too.

I liked that you had Bill falling apart - from the books he seems to be a strong character, but it shows that after the war everyone breaks at some point. You also created the tension really well between Bill and Fleur.

I found the ending a little cliched, but it was also sweet and nicely rounded off the story.

Name: Lunar_Essence (Signed) · Date: 06/17/09 0:02 · For: Dragons
That was brilliant! I chuckled through quite a few bits. Perfect characterization too, I thought. Playful and serious and fun too. I'm sure you'll win. Good luck :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and good wishes! I'm glad I made you laugh. I appreciate your confidence in me. We'll find out soon, I guess. ;-)

Name: Rislans88 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/09 18:26 · For: Dragons
i really enjoyed this!!! it's uplifting, well-written, and clever as well. well done :)

Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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