This is really good. I love hp poems. they are so good. I don't know if I've read 'To Harry' I'll have to check. (10) LOL...BYE :)
Good! I liked the To Harry better also but this was still good! Keep up the good work!
That was nice, but I prefered the To Harry one; this felt more like prose at times as the rhythm was a bit off in some places. Some parts of it were so beautiful, that pulls you right back up again! I hope you know this is con - crit, I'm not being mean and I really enjoy your work.
same as other review for to harry really...
i enjoy your poetry about H and D. i like the illusions that you create. keep up the good work!