Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/15/09 21:50
Chapter: The Unexpected Turn

I like this chapter. I'm glad Ginny went to live with him. I really really like the last sentence of this chapter. It says that she isn't just doing that because she has dirnks that night but because she wanted to. It also sounds cool. I really want to see what happens next. Especially with what her family thinks about them together.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am glad to know you liked it. Thats what i was trying to go for with the last second, as for the family the next chapter will have a some confrontation. I hope to have the thrid chapter up shortly. Thanks again!

Reviewer: ivewired
Date: 06/30/09 8:30
Chapter: The New Beginning

i likes the story

Author's Response: Thanks! I will hopefully have more soon.

Reviewer: sdnlr
Date: 06/29/09 16:46
Chapter: The New Beginning

Awesome.... I really like that Ginny and Harry have moved on and that Draco has come out from being a death eater. This story could go so far. I hope you right more soon.......

Author's Response: I hope I can get this story to go as far a I'd like, but we'll see. I will have more shortly. Thanks for letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/28/09 19:50
Chapter: The New Beginning

I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a good story so far. I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am just coming to the end of the second chapter and will be submitting it soon. Thanks for letting me know what you think!

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