Reviews For A Popped Bubble
Reviewer: youngrowling
Date: 04/02/11 18:54
Chapter: Two Different Pops

thank you everyone! my life would not be complete without the harry potter series. let's make the magic live on forever. :)

Reviewer: MisseZ
Date: 11/15/10 0:27
Chapter: Two Different Pops

A promising start ;)

Reviewer: MisseZ
Date: 11/15/10 0:27
Chapter: Two Different Pops

A promising start ;)

Reviewer: youngrowling
Date: 10/19/10 6:36
Chapter: Two Different Pops

to everyone, thank you so much for reading my story. i'm starting another one soon and hope you'll enjoy that as well! i'll try to write longer this time. :)
HUGS*

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 06/04/10 11:04
Chapter: Two Different Pops

loved it to the core.......... though a little longer stuff would have been appreciated...............none the less........................... :))))

Reviewer: youngrowling
Date: 06/03/10 23:43
Chapter: Two Different Pops

thank you so much to all of you who have read and reviewed this story. i had great fun writing it and hope you had fun reading it. thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: codeblah
Date: 01/04/10 19:26
Chapter: Two Different Pops

Okay, so I dunno if you'll read this but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! I keep checking every day!

Reviewer: veron_25
Date: 09/24/09 14:18
Chapter: Two Different Pops

this is very cute...im loving it so far! :)
hope you update soon...even though its only been about a week since your last update. im just excited to read whats next.

Reviewer: k7r8c9
Date: 08/02/09 22:01
Chapter: Two Different Pops

I quite like this fic. Entertaining, really funny. And, for the most part, in character. Lovely!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 07/31/09 3:03
Chapter: Two Different Pops

Wow! So after reading this, I checked your author page and found out that this is the only fic you’ve got up so far. And I’m impressed. For a first fic, this is a very well written, especially when it’s a non-canon pairing. :) There are basically no technical errors, and the characterization was also good. But I’d like to discuss some things I found interesting.

Most of the fics I’ve read have Hermione in the top positions in the Ministry, mainly because she’s been a top student in Hogwarts and also ‘cause she’s Harry Potter’s best friend. But in your fic, she’s working in ‘the lowest position possible’. That is surprising and quite different. Although it is a good change seeing her working under someone for a change, it doesn’t seem right that she’s doing some unimportant work and that also for five years. She’s Hermione and she should work somewhere in the... middle at least. Also, a person gets promoted gradually, yes? One minute she’s working with papers, the next she’s promoted to some high job. I’d suggest you make her have a normal job, nothing too special, but nothing too menial. She can be tired of her work and want something more... challenging so that’s why she’s excited about the promotion.



About Draco, again you have characterized him in a different manner, but it does fit with the books, so, it’s fine. :) Actually, I’m even kind of glad that he isn’t the moaning, depressed type because of his past, but instead is having fun. And that makes me curious. Is this DH complaint? I mean, other than the pairing being AU, of course.



Over all, this was a great start. Now I’m heading off to the next chapter. :)



- Afifa

Reviewer: Snidget151
Date: 07/30/09 17:37
Chapter: Two Different Pops

great so far :)

keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: Firefly337
Date: 07/05/09 23:05
Chapter: Two Different Pops

verrry nice - smoking up the screen.
when's the next installments coming?

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 06/14/09 11:41
Chapter: Two Different Pops

wow poor hermione! wait, does draco malfoy work in muggle proyection? interesting... i rlly like thid so far nd i hope u update soon!

Reviewer: Firefly337
Date: 06/14/09 3:50
Chapter: Two Different Pops

sounds interesting
how long till the next installment??
please don't be too long
:)

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