Really liked your story! You established Hermione's character really well, and it was in keeping with the canon, her insecurities, despite being the brightest witch of her age. The end was sweet, a little mushy, though that doesn't mean it was bad. I liked it, and your writing is brilliant. Hoping to read more of your stories!
I loved this chapter. I am reading it in one shot (duh), but I just had to comment separately here! The approval of grants bit was wonderfully put. And considering how Hermione always was sensitive to people's need (even house elves for that matter), this fit perfectly!
I think this is my favorite story so far! :)
thank you everyone! my life would not be complete without the harry potter series. let's make the magic live on forever. :)
Amazing even though it's complete I thought you should know how truely amazing your writing is and I love your ending!!!!!
Really good... Thouroughly enjoyable... Loved Draco's sweet personality...
Really love the story!!
Sappy. I like the DM/HG pairing, but this one was just a little too sappy at the end. However, you are doing really good work! Just next time try to keep the cliches to a minimum ;)
i truly loved it. thanx for posting this. my life would have wasted away without this (and many others) fan-fiction. thanks again
Fabulous! Absolutely brilliant end!! Nicely done ;)
i love this story it satisfied me so much, it's brilliant and it had just the right amount of everything in it, and no i'm not sugar-coating my honest opinion incase you're wondering i generally love this story and think it's wonderful.
A promising start ;)
A promising start ;)
Great story! It's so sweet I love both Hermione and Draco's characters. :)
I love this story.honestly.
to everyone, thank you so much for reading my story. i'm starting another one soon and hope you'll enjoy that as well! i'll try to write longer this time. :)
this is a definite GOOD one!!! has a great twist on Hermione and Draco.
I loooved this story. This was my second time reading it and it only made me love it more! Ever think of doing a epilogue series? Like after they got married and stuff? Maybe through an annoying Weasley in there? :)
i have recently just started reading fanfic and soo far this story is my favorite,you are a very talented writer. :)