Reviews For The Black Lake
Reviewer: MadEyeMaddy
Date: 06/16/09 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

M_W! I saw your gorgeous enchanting banner on the boards and decided that I needed to check this out. It was very chilling. In a good way. I love your poems! I'd love to see your write a chaptered story or a one-shot to see how it would turn out :D! Chao for now,

--Maddy (:

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree, the banner was beautiful. :) I'm glad you like the poem! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: the_weird_one
Date: 06/15/09 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! This is really amazing! I like the descibing and compelling imagery that you use to convey the Black Lake. It implies that there is something more than the giant squid that lurks in it's waters... it's very haunting.

Author's Response: Thanks, Weirdo! It's another poem I whipped up at the last minute. Those seem to be my best. I actually don't know what else is under there.... See, the inspiration for this was how whenever you go to a lake or a beach you just want to jump in and swim. Anyway, thanks for the review and I hope you'll read what I write in the future!

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