Wow! This is really amazing! I like the descibing and compelling imagery that you use to convey the Black Lake. It implies that there is something more than the giant squid that lurks in it's waters... it's very haunting.

Author's Response: Thanks, Weirdo! It's another poem I whipped up at the last minute. Those seem to be my best. I actually don't know what else is under there.... See, the inspiration for this was how whenever you go to a lake or a beach you just want to jump in and swim. Anyway, thanks for the review and I hope you'll read what I write in the future!