Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 10/21/09 15:15
Chapter: Rough Punishments and Snogging in the Library

Ron was snogging Avril?!? How could he? I really like the scene with Professor Mcgonagall. It was very good. I think the ending was the best part. It adds a nice twist to the story. It's just agreat ending. I think this chapter are really good and I'm excited for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for your support! It could either be a long time or a very short time for the next chapter though. Keep checking! And, yes, plot twists are the best.

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 10/21/09 12:52
Chapter: Strange Dreams and Wild Common Rooms

SSorry I took tre long. (tre is a funny word isn't it) I love that part "well it all started fifteen years ago, when my mum and dad got married-" that was hilarious I also most say that that part were Nevillle answered the question I felt like saying. "And then Ron knew something wrong, very wrong, Hermione had missled her hand into the air probably amking a tiny sonic boom she had only thrust her hand into the air with the urgancy like a kid that had to go to the bathroom. And on top of all that she hadn't even been called on. Ron hoped she wasn't too heartbroken, this must be the first she had not been called on in a class that wasn't snape, or because she'd already answered four in a row. You know, now that ROn looked at her she looked a little glum, and angry. She seemed to be stabbing that plant pretty hard, I hope we don't find Neville in the hospital wing today."

Wow that was a completly random, and not funny dialouge by yours truly. I'm glad I'm always around to submit weird weird things into a story's review list. You got to give yourself a hand this is the first time a story inspired my to right dialouge. COngrats!. Also give hand to crazy people ! (the reaction of people reading this review Oo0, or O-0, or O-o, or 3;0 (that be the weird cowboy winking at me while being weirded out, or the same thing with a toupee)
HAve you had your weirdness fill yet? I suppose I can give you one more weird thing (even if your on your knees at the computer screen going please NO MORE!!)

Windy; MINI WON-WONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs of screaming into the....not sunset......hmm.......into the ocean hoping to escape the mini rons on broomstick dive bombing her telling her to stay out of his story, he's also doing some nasty spells for Hermione who would be here if she wasn't afraid of hieghts. For Harry ron is....Windy stops wondering why eaxctly Harry isn't here
Windy: Why isn't HArry here?
Mini Won-Wons(in unison): He's probably snogging Gin-Hey he probably snogging Ginny! *the mini rons all fly off to go beat up their best friend who is in fact blissfully unware of this whole arguement and is stuck in Snapes detention (for fighting with seamus) sorting through the good and the bad dead worms.
*WIndy laughs as she watches ron fly away. then she trys to whistle, and no sound comes out.*
Windy: Dang it how come I can never do that. GELDON!!!! *nothing happens* Sigh I can't believe he wants me to call him this. *shakes her head in dismay* BILLY BOB JOE!!! *a magic carpet appears and whisks her away, Windy flies happily away smiling at a full reviews weirdness until she hears tiny screaming. She looks down to find a mini hermione running in paniced circles. WIndy shakes her head and lifts hermione onto her palm.
WIndy: What do you want?
Mini hermy: No that i have your attention I have a couple questions/accusations. WHy are you so big? *windy shrugs* DOn't you know that having a magic carpet is illegal? Windy nods* Shame on you!!! Hermione suddenly smiles* Okay I'm good now take me home.
Windy: Can't you apparate??*mini hermione sahkes her head* Windy sgrumbles her way down to hogwarts , and drops hermione on the ground. Suddenly ministry officials appear and head toward Windy
WIndy: Well crap. *windy thens smiles and dispeers in a puff of pink smoke because she remembers that this only a story.

Well crap this is a review!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE LOVE IT I LOVE IT! *faints with from the awesomeness of this story pops up again* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT* faints again* repeapts 20 times
There it's a decentish review now. I'm SO sorry I get side tracked like that! really next review for next chapter will- HOLY MOTHER OF COW THERES ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!! *runs frantically to the submit button so she can go on to the next chapter, she is in such a hurry that she only leaves behind the word
-Inwy

Author's Response: Windy!!!! Yes, I know what you're saying about Hermione not being called on. But I think the teachers need to let other kids answer, too. But I am very honored you wrote me some dialogue. Oh, the thing about whistling? I TOTALLY can't either. I used to be able too. Darn braces. I'm sorry you disappeared in a puff of pink smoke. Lol, yes chapters four and five are both out now, and I'm sorry to say we're about half-way through the story :(. I think four or five more chapters. Btw, you signed our name as Inwy. Also, when the story's over, keep checking my author page. I might have a surprise for you kids ;).

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 10/21/09 12:17
Chapter: Rough Punishments and Snogging in the Library

My how Hermione's life sucks. How many times must she endure this? ;) I'm having fun reading this story, but cannot deny I hope you right this situation in a hurry. Or I'm going to dump Ron myself. And that is saying something.

Author's Response: Maybe a little more. But she might get some revenge of her own..... And I think right now EVERYONE wants to dump Ron theirselves....(: --Maddy

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/20/09 18:20
Chapter: Strange Dreams and Wild Common Rooms

pleaseupdate!!!!! i looovvveee how whenever someone says "i have to tell so and so this" then all of the sudden there like "tell me what?" its hilarious!i dont understand the whole ginny and harry thats going on. i love harry when he starts stuttering though *looks up into the sky dreamily wondering if there are n e guys out there like harry and ron, but contents herself with knowing she can alwys find them in her precious books*

Author's Response: Heh heh, thanks. Chapter 5 is in the queue. And yes, secrets do tend to come out. As for H/G They both like each other, but Ginny told Seamus she was going to the village with him to make Harry jealous :O. And I bet there are some Harrys and Rons out there. *dreamysigh* Ron Weasley.... --Maddy(:

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 09/13/09 20:41
Chapter: Strange Dreams and Wild Common Rooms

I really love this story. It's so funny. I was going to rewiev every chapter but the VMA preshow is on.... Anyway, I think that characterization is great. I really like Hermione. I haven't read alot of her, but she is the best from what I've read. Ron is great too. He is very believable. I also like Seamus. My favorite characterization parts were the first couple of paragraphs. It was a great way to start the story.

Don't even get me started on the dare. It was great! It was a great idea. And when ron stormed in started saying stuff and Seamus asked Ginny out and and Harry reacted, that was brilliant. Brillant. And then the whole fight thing happened later. I just loved it.

And the whole Hermione/Ron/Avril situation is great. I like how in the begining we didn't know who she was. I hope everything goes okay with everyone. Especially the Harry/Ginny stuff. I'm excited for the Ron/Hermione date thing. I hope it's funny.

I can't wait to find out what happens next, especially in McGonagals office. I can tell that it's going to be good. In my oppinion this is a great story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: When I read your review, I smiled so big I thought my face would fall off. Thank you so much :D. The funny part is, I started writing this back in like April or March and I don't even remember where I got the idea! The next chapter isn't anything great, but I will tell you that Avril's tricks are about to get a LOT worse ;). The date itself isn't THAT great. But there's still like four or five chapters to go so keep your eyes peeled. Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 09/13/09 19:53
Chapter: Strange Dreams and Wild Common Rooms

Congratulations on chapter four Maddy! I really like this one too:) Send me the next chappie whenever! Sarah

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll send you....6? whenever. Been superbusy. Talk 2 ya soon. --Maddy(:

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/10/09 16:44
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

aah i love thiss!!!! yay hermione :) please ad more soon!!! its really,really good!

Author's Response: Awwww you totally just made me smile :D. I love hearing that. I just submitted Chapter 4 so lets all cross our fingers it gets accepted soon (:

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/10/09 16:39
Chapter: Detentions and Mysterious Girls

oooooooh i hate that girl -.- *shoots daggers at her* she better be goin down. go hermione!! and stupid malfoy. hahahaha i love this story so much :)

Author's Response: Hahahaaa:) thanks. Sorry I didn't even see I didnt respond to this

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/10/09 16:33
Chapter: I Dare You

i love it already!! aaah i cant wait to read more.. even though its on the next page... hehehe. :)

Author's Response: Hahaaa. I guess I never responded to this(:

Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/05/09 19:26
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

Grrr...I absolutely hate Avril! Take her down!

Author's Response: Oh trust me. This isn't the last we've seen of her ;). She still has some tricks up her sleeve. Sorry for the delay, chap4 might not be up for awhile. I stll need to update and resubmit and I've been superbusy. Love hearing from you guys though. Keep the reviews coming :D.

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 08/10/09 10:58
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

Fours my favroite number :)
-WIndy of even

Author's Response: Four better be your favorite number, because chapter four approaches. After some good old fashioned cleaning up(:. It might not be for awhile, I'm gonna be busy the next few days :P. And school starts the 25th? for me. Sigh. I'm expecting another review, missy. Lol. --Maddy

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 08/10/09 10:55
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

THIS IS SCANDILOUS there are only TWO reviews beside mine thats a no no I must alter this because your story in its Supercalifragilisticespialidous ( sorry If I didn't spell that right it's not in the dictoinary. By the way this is in the complimentary way not the atrcoius one. Or however you spell it) it deserves more than a measly two SO HERES THREE!!!!! By the way when I said REVIEW I meant WRITE so yeah. LASSIE should be a DAUSCHOUND! (I'm a doxen I'm a doxen don't call me dauschhoooound. Yes this is a song from my twins silly doggy songs sound track includes one hit wonders such as : The beagle the beagle it has eyes like eagle, I'm a ch-ch-chiuaauaa (my verzion of small yipping whose name I can't spell) and I come from Mexico!! and other wonderful songs that your whole family will enjoy. (oh great I'm ADVERTISING) Yes I did say twin, does she act her age NO.) Anyway about the whole Lassie as doxen is because my sister was watching something with a collie in it. It just occered to me about how interesting that would be if Lassie was a doxen. Anyway what kind of name is Lassie, it's girl in scottish talk ( I'm pretty sure lassie is a girl, if not thats some twisted joke). So when ever you call "Lassie, girl come on Lassie girl, your bassiclly saying girl girl come on girl girl. Wow that whole Lassie conversation took a long time.

-Windy who ? (I cant think of any way so for the moment its WIndy who is unkown emotion or feeling (which are the same thing....strange) )

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 08/10/09 10:36
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

YAY another magical chapter.*rainbows appear while chapter dances over them* You some strange strange very weird things come out of my mouth/keyboard sometimes. Anywoo this is a review for your story not MY oddities ( I wonder why I captalized MY like that. Hey! I did it again. Ooops I did it again, weird song) So this absolutly LOVEly story. Ron is such a sweet little dunderhead. And Hermione is mad. Well thats just because shes always mad since Avril! (I wonder if those italics are going to work. I love being dramatic) i really do like how you portray the characters. Poor, Poor Ginny unknowingly turning down Harrys proposal to go to Hogsmeade together. Tsk. RONNIE is the worst nickname ever I'm SO glad Hermione doesn't call him that I would go bonkers. By they way I don't think you have Ron saying 'Mione enough but he seems to call her that. I want to waltz with potatos sing as good as Tomato!! I'm Crazy, it's a scary scary thing. Though very enjoyable. I'm glad to hear I'm keeping you sane. Lovely thing sanity is. Though I prefere it with a in in front personally. Yay something something something REVIEW something something NOW something something something CURSE OF DOOM something something something BUNNY!

-Windy whose sanity is often questionable

Author's Response: Ohhhhh, Windy (:. Your reviews keep me soooooo happy (:. Sorry I was SO slow to respond but I was on vacation. And yes I do agree. Ronnie is a TERRIBLE nickname. ;). --Maddy

Reviewer: TheManagement
Date: 08/03/09 8:17
Chapter: I Dare You

I liked it a lot! It was very entertaining and you certainly grabbed my attention within the first three paragraphs. And it all sounds so believable! I can totally see Ron, Hermione, Harry, Draco, and Ginny acting the way you wrote them. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing characters and their dialogue. Especially Ron and Draco :D. Check back for updates! --Maddy(:

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 08/02/09 23:32
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

Hello, Maddy!

*squee* It's finally validated. *huggles*. Congratulations! Keep them coming:) I'll keep reading. I feel terrible because I'm the only one besides you who knows what happens, but at the same time I have this strange feeling that I'm very important, and am holding a prophesy or something in my hand. MWAHAHA. (ignore me, I'm insane these days.) Anways, hope to keep in touch. XDXDXDXDXD

*huggles again, just because I'm so happy* ~Sarah~

Author's Response: Thanks, Sarah. Your review made me smile :). But you're not leaving yet, no no no. You're coming back... in 3 weeks...you said? And my story wouldn't be the same without you. I'm not sure if I ever sent you the last few chapters, though. I think I've made a few tweaks to the story though. Get excited for Chapter 4, because it's one of my faves. Four and Seven are good ones. (: P.S. You are very important! Lol. PM me!

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 07/20/09 8:04
Chapter: Detentions and Mysterious Girls

okay, again LOL

Author's Response: Aww thank you. Thanks for the reviews, too. Anyway, Chaper 3 is finally up! Yay yay yay!

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 07/20/09 8:01
Chapter: I Dare You

LOL........ good stuff, but could you wirte, i dunno, LONGER CHAPTERS??? it was so shrt.... *snivel*

Author's Response: Aww thank you! That made me so happy. Sorry for the delay, I'll try to polish up chapter 3 and resubmit. Sorry for the long wait. Don't forget about me.

Reviewer: lily luna
Date: 07/19/09 18:59
Chapter: I Dare You

.awhh love ist so cute. so good!

Author's Response: Thank you! To everyone readin this, sorry I've been slow on updates. I've been going on trips all summer and I really need to clean up the third chapter. Sorry again. --Maddy.

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 06/20/09 20:16
Chapter: Detentions and Mysterious Girls

Oh dear a cliffie Tisk. Anyway yay another chapter. Really I think I almost started dancing when I saw there was two instead of one. Talk about waiting. The next wait shall not be this long I declare!!! And what I declare should most promptly come true *looks piontly, but slightly threating*. Love it Dawling ( what am i writing?) just make more soon or I will get miffed. (Isn't that a fun word miff?)

-Windy a delusional romantice ( I would suppose......BUM BUM BAAAAHHHH)

Author's Response: Lol I love reading your reviews. Chapter 3 was submitted about a day after this, so I promise the wait wont be so long. And in the chapter we'll get to see a little more of the "mysterious girl". It's definitely my least favorite chapter, but 4 will be better. (:. And I will definitely use the word miff somewhere. Lol. -Maddy(:

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 06/14/09 18:56
Chapter: Detentions and Mysterious Girls

Congratulations, Maddy! Boy, am I glad to see this one up, finally. Great job. I did find one mistake (being my nitpicky, beta self) which both you and I missed. Second last scene where Ron meets with Avril you have : to see a slight familiar-looking girl waiting around. We need to change 'slight' to 'slightly'. If you go into Manage Stories under your Account Info, you can edit this chapter and manually fix this yourself. It won't need to be Modded again, but it will make my conscience clear. (lol). Anyways, good job. I'll have chapter six to you soon.

--ginnygirl16

Author's Response: I'll have to fix that eventually. Too lazy. Sigh. Talk to you over on the beta boards! Chao!! -Maddy

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