Reviewer: KBWeasley
Date: 10/03/11 7:25
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

Not needed but cute twist, does tie everythimg together so it fits. Thank you

Reviewer: LetosSecrets
Date: 09/23/11 1:18
Chapter: I Dare You

It's a really cute story.
Though the language used in some parts seem like a developing writer. But overall I quite liked your story it made me giggle at the cute bits. :)

Reviewer: Claraowl
Date: 09/07/11 17:30
Chapter: I Dare You

I've read this story before and I loved it then and I love it still.

Reviewer: katielovesron
Date: 07/21/11 17:52
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

that was amzing its going into my favs!

Author's Response: Thanks so much it means a lot! Check out my other stories too!

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/23/11 17:50
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

Haha!! I absolutely LOVE this story, and i am a HUGE Ron/Hermione shipper!!!Keep writing R/H!!! PS: PLEASSEEEE

Author's Response: Thanks so much:) I wrote this like 2 years ago!!! Ahhh! I've tried working on other things, but I'm lazy/busy if that makes sense. If my beta ever responds, I might have something else up soon :). Keep looking out

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/23/11 17:41
Chapter: Almost-Kisses and Angry Villains

Awwww!!! I love this story it's sooo beast!!!

Author's Response: Awww thank you:) that means a lot!

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 11/21/10 11:46
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

Fricken amazing write another pleaseeee love Ginny x

Author's Response: Awww thanks. I've Been kind of working on something but lifes been really busy:) I appreciate the time taken to review:)

Reviewer: gryffindor18
Date: 10/16/10 16:27
Chapter: Almost-Kisses and Angry Villains

I love this story so so much!!!!! I would rather enjoy snogging Ron.

Author's Response: Aha! Wouldn't we all? Thanks so much, it still amazes me that this story is still getting reviews even after almost 2 years... Hopefully I'll have time to write soon. -madeyemaddy

Reviewer: pam
Date: 05/21/10 11:49
Chapter: The First Date and Strange Kisses

ok I just HAD to review it was just too funny, too life-like, i love the part where first he's just looking at her she asks him why? , ha says the "i can believe we're together..." adn then how he leans in and kisses her nose! , its just, those two moments are just exactly like two with my exboyfriend, right afte rhe had asked me to be his gilfriend, he was looking at me , i asking him what it was, and he asked me s adorably, what can;t i look at my girldfried? and then he did the same nose thiing. Your story was adorable, ajajajaj and we also had an Avril-like girl , after him. It so weird how similar this story is to me and hom :S

Author's Response: Awww thanks for the sweet review(:. That's really crazy how it was so like you and your ex. Keep reading, I'm hoping to start writing again. --Maddy

Reviewer: suzzy11
Date: 04/14/10 8:24
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

great story !
keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you! I am, I'm just not getting anywhere. I'm gonna wait til summer til things cool down to get more serious about it though(: --Maddy

Reviewer: clarabelle
Date: 04/09/10 23:06
Chapter: Burns, Blisters, and Bruises.

"I can't help it that I'm so attractive!" lmao favorite line so far! :D

Author's Response: Hahaa thank you! Keep reading(:

Reviewer: lilyputt
Date: 03/25/10 20:50
Chapter: Almost-Kisses and Angry Villains

This is a really good story I like it a lot, can i kiss Ron now, lol.

Author's Response: Awww thanks so much(: and sure, why not?:) --Maddy

Reviewer: Chudleycannonsfan
Date: 03/08/10 18:14
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

Thanks for a great story. Loved it. You so got that Ron and hermione's relationship is imperfect. The best Ron & Hermione story I have read in a while.
Thanks again

Author's Response: Thank you so much(: *warm fuzzies* you just made my day(: --Maddy(:

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 02/12/10 16:46
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

I think that this is a cute ending to the story. :)

I like how Avril appears in this chapter. It made me smile.

Another thing that I like is this sentence:

“Hi, Avril. Would you like to stay for tea?” said Hermione, with hard eyes, purposely trying to puff out her stomach.

I like it because it shows that Hermione is kind of... proud that Ron chose her and she wants to show it off. It's not just the guys who do that.

However, I think that the most well writtin line is this:

For a second, the long-forgotten face was quiet, as she realized who’s doorway she currently occupied.

I just love it. :)

This whole story made me smile and laugh and say 'aww', which very few stories have done without being too mushy. That is a great thing to do. I love the idea for this story and I'm excited to read when you write next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I personally don't like the epilogue at all though because it's so...epilogue-y and different from the flow of the rest of the story lol. I'll try not to keep you guys waiting for *ahem* whatever pops up next... but I'm having maaaaaaajorrrrrr writer's block (for filler, I have my main plot points worked out, but if I didn't throw in some extra scenes it will be like 3 chapters hahaa) and when I go back and read this story it's like ...Wow. Sometimes I amaze myself with what I've written hahaa. I'm glad you liked the story(: Hope to hear from you soon! --Maddy(:

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 02/05/10 21:49
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

That was fun. Really, really fun...

Author's Response: What was fun? :D

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 02/04/10 22:04
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

I'MMMM BAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCKKKK! Oh my gosh I've been gone for so long! *sobs* my little story (well your story but lets not be picky) has gone and grown up without meeeeeeeeeeeee! *breaks down completely. then randomly pops up* I'm so proud of you Maddy (in like friend proud of friend for finishing something...finally) This story turned out so good. and the ten years jump ahead was totally unexpected but perfect for this story none the less. I'm sorry I wasn't there to comment on it all of the way but I got fed up with mugglenet for awhile (I know what you're thinking. *gasp*). It was just I was sick of not being able to register my stories because of it's bad grammer. Plus I can never stay with one sight for too long anyway. But I'm back and all of my favriotest stories have just been updated or *sniffle* completed! Anyway if you want o see that Teddy Lupin fic that I may or may not have (but probably have) complianed to you about. My username there is Tilly of Silly. Just saying you don't have to. Though I wouuld love it if you did! Geez can't I give a single compliment without advertising my self...silly of course I can't being unobvious about what I really want people to do would be totally out of character. And would in fact make me slightly less pig headed and we couldn't have that now could we? *continues to chide herself* Anyway this really was a spectacular read. I'm still searching for a beta if you know any none busy ones (stupid advertising wheres lets not be a jerk spray when you need it?) not they really need to be unbusy because I'll probably send my chapters in here once a year (or maybe only a 11 and a half months). Anyway just saying. So Do have any other cute adorable awesme, hilarious other stories for me to compliment/advertise/be totally weird on? Just tell me if you need some crazy support and I'm there.

-Windy of Waverly Place (*sigh* not really but I think if I was I would be friends with Harper. Unless you've never scene the show then just pretend it's one of my weird sign off like WIndy wuvs Walruses. They are so teeny and cute *sarcasm heavily used here except may be the cute part, but only in stuffed animal form! *WOnders why she's diffending herself on matters of walrus cuteness. Decides to skip away singing "walrus oh walrus oh wear is thy bucket" * *this song is not actually patented we're not liablly for any dissapointment in the mater of it not existing*)

-WIndy who wuvs walruses (and that it fot tonight folks buh-bye!)

Author's Response: Windy! You are back! Ands it's okay to be frustrated with your stories for errors, but all you have to do is click that little link that says "Beta Forums", make an account and find a beta to help you edit your story! And what site is this fanfiction on (this Tilly of Silly...)? As for betas, just check the forums, I guarentee it's all there. Plus you can message me anytime(:. As for other fics, I don't have any up yet but check my username once in awhile cuz I do have some stuff I'm working on, I'm just slowwwwww. I will definitely miss your reviews though and hope hope hope that you make a beta boards account so we can chat! --Maddy(:

Reviewer: Rose Molly Weasley
Date: 01/25/10 21:34
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Another great twist bringing Avril back in their lives at this later date!

Please keep writing! Also, I have a few things I have been working on that I plan to post soon, so keep an eye out for me.

Thanks for the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so sad it's over, I'll miss this whole experience a TON. And I promise I'll keep writing, even if it takes me forever. And I will definitely keep an eye out for you. PM me at the beta boards any time. Your welcome --Maddy(:

Reviewer: swimluver711
Date: 01/22/10 20:00
Chapter: Epilogue - 10 years later

awww, it was so cute :]
i really enjoyed reading it all!
hope you keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, I'll keep writing.

Reviewer: jgranger
Date: 01/22/10 7:45
Chapter: I Dare You

This story was so good! Do you have any other in mind???

Author's Response: As a matter of fact....:) I do. I just don't have a beta. But I have a really bad writer's block. But don't worry, no matter how long it takes...this isn't the last of me:)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 01/17/10 15:55
Chapter: The First Date and Strange Kisses

Of course I want the epilogue!

I'm so happy for Ron and Hermione. They finally had their kiss. It was a cute kiss too, which makes it better.

Author's Response: Thank you! I still have to go over the epilogue. I'm solo betaing right now, so it might take a couple rejections before it's posted.

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