Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 08/20/10 23:43
Chapter: Variations on a (Party) Theme

I liked how it was just little fragments about parties with the ramifications of war in mind... there was also a good balance of mildly depressing ones and warm and fuzzy ones.

The only one that didn't quite sit right with me was the one about Harry and Ginny being invited to parties... I'm not exactly sure why but it didn't quite seem to fit to me.

I liked that the fragments didn't happen in chronological order - I think it was good that they weren't connected by time or character, just by theme.

Great story though!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/05/09 1:36
Chapter: Variations on a (Party) Theme

I like it.

Author's Response: Short and simple. Thanks.

Reviewer: greennotebook
Date: 06/02/09 11:33
Chapter: Variations on a (Party) Theme

This is really well done! I'm impressed, because it could have been incredibly disjointed and confusing, but it somehow works. I think it's how you manage to keep the tone the same, whether you're writing about James and LIly in hiding, Draco swearing, or the kids climbing in through a window.

The downside to that is how some of your characters start blurring together. I think you've done a good job overall in differentiating personalities, but there is a bit of information overload in places. Your Molly and your Hermione start to run together. The way the characters interact with each other, however, is top-notch.

This is a great piece of writing and I definitely enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and especially the concrit. Each of the drabbles just sort of fell onto the paper, so I'm glad they worked at all. Thanks again!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 05/29/09 21:08
Chapter: Variations on a (Party) Theme

awww...this was such a sweet story!! er..stories... great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 05/29/09 7:04
Chapter: Variations on a (Party) Theme

LOVED IT! that was really sweet and funny and really gr8! i liked the part with the marauders a lot and harry's bday party! it was all fantastic tho! keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement :)

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