Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 08/18/09 21:09
Chapter: The Burrow

Oh ho, so many things going on. I think I know why Harry didn't know what was going on. There's just too much happening in a small amount of time. I don't know how comfortable I am with this almost new development, but here it works. But then I have a hard time seeing Ron and Hermione not being together. Now how long will the family take to acknowledge the attack on Harry, Neville and Bill. It's been so long (I'm glad you're back) I might need to refresh my memory.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/18/09 17:57
Chapter: The Burrow

Well that reunion went remarkably well. I understand why Ron confronted Sirius like that but geez talk about awkward!!!! Great chapter, Harry and Ginny's news was nothing compared to Sirius though... ;-)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 08/18/09 13:38
Chapter: The Burrow

Great chapter. Like the way this story is going. Like your characters. It might not always run smoothly, but hoping this works toward a happy ending.

Reviewer: rakkanights
Date: 07/29/09 21:29
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

Very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/16/09 18:37
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

Aww, very sweet. Not exactly the best proposal but I can honestly see Harry doing it like that...Cannot wait to read more!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/16/09 18:34
Chapter: Promised Freedom

Lovely chapter. Very cool idea that Sirius could come back from the vail and get a job, especially in the auror department...Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/16/09 18:27
Chapter: A New Challenge

Exciting little bit of romance there!!! Loved it :-) Interested to find out how Ginny will react in the next chapter...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/16/09 18:23
Chapter: Memories and An Unexpected Guest

Ooo, now there is one person thats not in on the secret, bit of a surprise for bill... and then on the other hand poor Kreacher, but then again that was amusing... Great chapter :-)

Reviewer: aviddaydreamer
Date: 06/27/09 18:50
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

I have to say, so far I'm really liking this story! Sirius is back (praise JESUS amen!) and thus far, no one is being obnoxious! What more could a girl ask for? Oh yeah, maybe some *ahem* detailed Sirius/Hermione scenes in the near future?? Fingers crossed!

Reviewer: femfrog27
Date: 06/17/09 17:15
Chapter: From the Past to the Future

I love Hr/Serius or Hr/Snape stories and I like the plot of this one. Well done! I cant wait for chapter 7..

Reviewer: jamesandlilyfan85
Date: 06/17/09 13:26
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

Aww he proposed! I want more Sirimione! Please?? Good chapter.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 06/14/09 20:39
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

What an unexpected turn. Very cool chapter.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/14/09 20:02
Chapter: Out of Time and Place

Nice chapter. It will be interesting to see what happens at the Burrow.

Reviewer: jamesandlilyfan85
Date: 06/10/09 12:42
Chapter: Promised Freedom

Oh I do love Sirimione in addition to my pen name pair. Update again soon!

Reviewer: LexidaLou
Date: 05/31/09 17:31
Chapter: Promised Freedom

I seriously love this story more and more and more and more and more with each chapter!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/31/09 11:56
Chapter: Promised Freedom

That was an another Awesome chapter. Though it does worry me about the connection between Sirius and Hermione. What about Ron? I guess I'm a canon shipper from the get go. I do have to say, Wow, Sirius going from criminal to Auror, with Harry as his boss, that has some real possibilities. And the secret passageways, I knew there was more to Grimmauld Place than JKR wrote. I'd say there's a whole lot more to it. Good chapter.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 05/30/09 22:02
Chapter: Promised Freedom

Guess things were going according to Kingsley. Kreacher and Sirius are on the road to a better relationship, and I can see that Hermione is not going to object to a relationship with Sirius. It'll be Harry as her big brother Sirius will have to deal with. This should be very interesting.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 05/30/09 21:51
Chapter: A New Challenge

More good chapters. Kingsley's plans are not exactly going as planned, so to speak. "Rapidly spinning out of control" is a phrase that comes to mind.
Poor Kreacher, it's going to take time for him and Sirius to learn to like, and hopefully trust, each other. They were both in very dark places in their previous lives.
This is definitely shaping up to be a story I want to read in it's entirety.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 05/30/09 21:05
Chapter: Explanations

I didn't think this story would interest me. I was wrong. It's a good story, very interesting, well told, the characters ring true. I'm thinking it's going to get a lot more interesting very soon.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/24/09 3:52
Chapter: A New Challenge

This really terrific.. So now there's one more person who knows. Kingsley's really not going to be happy. Sirius better start making up to Kreacher. I do worry about that elf.

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