Reviews For Je Suis En Vie
Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 07/08/09 23:33
Chapter: Je Suis En Vie

What a relief! A post-Hogwarts story that doesn't begin with Harry making out with Ginny at the first possible second and tells what would realistically happen! I love how Harry's first thought is of his hunger. So real. I'm favoriting this story, so you'd best keep up the good work and update soon!

Reviewer: bunsen
Date: 05/24/09 18:32
Chapter: Je Suis En Vie

HI- This is my first ever review - thought that this was a great start to a new story - thankyou for picking up exactly where the story left off and choosing to not go straight to relationship resolution. I love what you are doing with your writing style - you aren't aping J.K. but are still delivering a story that dovetails nicely. I can't wait to read more - keep writing!

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/24/09 18:24
Chapter: Je Suis En Vie

Very good job on this one. I thought I had reviewed this before but I guess not. I'm interested to see where you take this story as we are both writing one from this time period. Anyways, you have very nice writing skills--keep it up!

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 05/10/09 17:41
Chapter: Prologue

Quite a good start.I like very much your story.Close to the original (JK)but with your personal touch.Keep writing.

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/10/09 10:34
Chapter: Prologue

Very nicely written. It is a lovely beginning to what I am sure will be a great story. I look forward to reading more. I think that this story has alot of potential, and is definitley going to be a favorite. Your words are very convincing, and make the readers feel as if they are there. Excellent job--I hope to read more soon. Good luck with the rest of the story.

--ginnygirl16

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 05/09/09 22:54
Chapter: Prologue

Augh! What do mean by that leaving us there like that. Write on write on. Let me remind you, what I think is the truth. Prolouges are really just crap ( a.k.a. a way to hook the reader. Let me get this to you that's what the summerys for. Really if your going to write this at all, put it in the first chapter when you actually have something to go with that filler) unless the actually explain something that happened a. in a prior book meaning this is the sequal or b. something an important part of the story but too short to include. This was a hooker/filler. But it is without a doubt a hooker. I'm hooked keep writing.

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