Awwww, sweet ending.
This is very funny, BB. I'm hard pressed to find a favourite part because it is all good. Tim's voice and character shine through and I found myself constantly grinning or giggling.
I hate Apparation; it makes me feel like how I felt after throwing up an undigested rat that, for some crazy reason, I decided to eat. Ha ha, I love this line because, although unnecessary to the plot, it says reams about Tim.
I have a small nit pick, and I could well be wrong. just you wait, this only the starting, bitch! I think this would read better if you said 'this is only the start, bitch!'
The ending was good and totally unexpected. I thought he would ruin her day, so when that Durmstrang student got hold of Tim I was taken aback. Shocking behaviour and brilliantly done.
Great story. Carole xxx
I’m a roguish, profane monkey. HURRAH!
I haven’t the slightest idea as to how I inspired you to write this story, but I am deeply honoured to have made an appearance, even as a monkey.
But don’t Crucio me again – that hurts!
~ Tim the Enchanter
Tim, the monkey? This Tim wouldn't be named after a certain Enchanter, would he?
Author's Response: Hee hee, maybe. Or maybe not. It's up to you...
Thanks for the review, Molly!