Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 05/08/09 12:42
Chapter: An Ape Reporter's Tale

Awwww, sweet ending.

This is very funny, BB. I'm hard pressed to find a favourite part because it is all good. Tim's voice and character shine through and I found myself constantly grinning or giggling.

I hate Apparation; it makes me feel like how I felt after throwing up an undigested rat that, for some crazy reason, I decided to eat. Ha ha, I love this line because, although unnecessary to the plot, it says reams about Tim.

I have a small nit pick, and I could well be wrong. just you wait, this only the starting, bitch! I think this would read better if you said 'this is only the start, bitch!'

The ending was good and totally unexpected. I thought he would ruin her day, so when that Durmstrang student got hold of Tim I was taken aback. Shocking behaviour and brilliantly done.

Great story. Carole xxx

Reviewer: Tim the Enchanter
Date: 05/04/09 2:37
Chapter: An Ape Reporter's Tale

I’m a roguish, profane monkey. HURRAH!

I haven’t the slightest idea as to how I inspired you to write this story, but I am deeply honoured to have made an appearance, even as a monkey.

But don’t Crucio me again – that hurts!

~ Tim the Enchanter

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 05/03/09 13:52
Chapter: An Ape Reporter's Tale

Tim, the monkey? This Tim wouldn't be named after a certain Enchanter, would he?

Author's Response: Hee hee, maybe. Or maybe not. It's up to you...

Thanks for the review, Molly!

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