Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/04/11 9:17
Chapter: Shock of News

Kingsley isn't a Death Eater.

Reviewer: Isa_90
Date: 06/18/09 15:00
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

It's a great story! Hey I just wanted to let you know that I saw this same story in the website under the name of elf_princess16. I don't know if that's you or someone else who is coping your story. Just letting you know. Great story by the way

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the reading :-) Yeh, I'm also elf_princess16 and Shena on I really appreciate that you let me know though! Shena

Reviewer: gg of griffindor
Date: 11/17/08 5:32
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation


Author's Response: Haha, SO glad to hear you say that.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/15/08 23:01
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

YES! Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was so worried that Draco would go back to the Slytherins. Guess he realised it showed more strength of character and power to stand alone. And I'm glad Harry saw sense too, and that was a lovely thing for him to do for them. Wonder if in this reality Harry will end up with Parvati? I've really enjoyed this fic, it's had humour, tragedy, laughter, and love, what a combination.

Author's Response: Oh, waow, thank you! That was a very good comment to receive. I'm all ahppy now :-) Im so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: tomsgal
Date: 03/14/08 15:34
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

That was AMAZING!! Well done!!

Author's Response: Thankyou!!!!rnShena

Reviewer: thomasandrewfelton
Date: 09/25/07 20:51
Chapter: Rude Awakening

that last ending was so

Author's Response: :-) Glad you thought so, thanks!

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 21:12
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

such a nice story u should write another

Author's Response: I know, thankyou! I sometimes do get a longing to write another story but I'm always so busy that I probably own't get a chance until the end of November when I'm on holiday. Then I'll think about it...I'm glad you liked it anyhow! Shena

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 20:02
Chapter: Passing Time

THEY R ALL GONNA FAIL HORRIBLY!!!!! XD srry srry i couldnt resist

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 19:11
Chapter: Spying And Broom Flying

hermione ish being sneaky XD

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 18:57
Chapter: Why Is It Always Neville?

poor neville he doesnt deserve this he ish so accident proned

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 18:38
Chapter: How It Started

Xd again a funny chapter and how did u get the idea for the door of the lsytherin common room it was brilliant

Author's Response: Haha, I just went opposite of what the Gryffindor door is.

Author's Response: Oh sorry I got the stories mixed up. I don't even remember how I got the idea for the Slytherin door, i guess it just occurred to me as I was writing. I didnt really plan this story out!

Reviewer: esther407
Date: 09/12/07 18:33
Chapter: Malfoy's Mistake

XDDDDDDD this chapter was funny

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 01/27/07 18:28
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

Nice story, a little wierd at the ending ( ‘Hermione, would you be my girlfriend?’ ‘Yes, of course!’), it doesn't seem right, that's all.

Also, you should get this beta'd. There are a lot of grammatical flaws through the story and also quite a lot of misspellings.

I don't mean to be rude or anything, really, I enjoyed the story! It's meant as constructive critique.


Author's Response: Thankyou Krissa, I know you are right. I;ve had similar responses a lot so I definitely should get betas for my fics. And work on some of those scenes. Thankyou and glad you enjoyed the plot! Shena

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/19/07 16:49
Chapter: Draco's Final Transformation

lovely chapter. i thought the part where he asked her to be his girlfriend was a little rushed, but another than that, it was a great. this was a rly nice fic. with a good plot. great job on it.

Author's Response: wow, Padfoot, lots of reviews! Sorry it's taken so long to reply. Thankyou for all the comments, glad you liked and I definitely need to take more care with spelling. Shena

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/19/07 16:45
Chapter: Passing Time

loved how hermione tricked draco. great chapter.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/19/07 16:22
Chapter: Confrontation

another good chapter. i rly think harry and ron should accept her desicion.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/19/07 16:03
Chapter: Shock of News

loved this chapter. they are getting closer. yay.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/18/07 15:04
Chapter: Slytherin VS Gryffindor

well i think snape smiling is just plain wrong. as for the game, it had a very interesting outcome. it was the first time i read something like that happening. very a good chapter overall.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/16/07 15:54
Chapter: Night Duty

gee i wonder if her name rly just slipped out. that was a rly good chapter. It showed that their finally getting together.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/16/07 15:48
Chapter: Rude Awakening

aw.. there communiticating. now this is where the story gets even better! great chapter

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