Reviews For The Addition
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/12/10 10:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a lovely name! I've never gone into labor while out in public. I'm glad Pinky was able to be there, although hidden. I'm really happy that Severus and Daniella were given another chance at parenthood. Thanks for writing this one-shot and letting us know that the baby arrived safely.

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 04/29/09 23:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm glad you posted this story here. Poor Severus--after facing DEs and the Dark Lord and Nagini, he doesn't know how to handle childbirth.

I actually don't much like reading birth stories because I had such problems with my own (though both kids are just fine now). But I like that you acknowledge that labor is worse than Crucio. That made me laugh.

Author's Response: I'd like to keep posting here, but all depends on the validation issues. My fingers are crossed. I've "met" a mod who has been a HUGE help. Glad you enjoyed the short. another is in queue. Dani

Reviewer: harmonyhall
Date: 04/19/09 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

my only reaction was awww. i loved it.

Author's Response: Happy to please. There is another one coming, and then a new story...somewhat connected to the trilogy. We'll see how things go with MNFF. Hopefully, the validation times have been corrected. If so, I may stay. Dani

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 04/19/09 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

:) And to think I thought you'd disappeared. This one shot was great.

Author's Response: I almost did. I was having great difficulty getting the story through the queue, but thanks to Hannah, we seem to have fixed the problem. There is another one-shot coming up. Stay tuned. Dani

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