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Reviewer: LunaPotter_134
Date: 04/27/09 8:04
Chapter: Chapter 6

oh please write more
it isso good i just can't stop reading it

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 04/26/09 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 6

That was soo good. I really like the part with Luna and how she knew that it was Severus Snape. Then at the end with Hermione in Severus's room. That was bloody good. Update with the next chapter really soon.

Reviewer: thenextHGranger
Date: 04/26/09 14:10
Chapter: Chapter 6

Oh my gosh! Wow. Its getting rally complicated now! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 04/26/09 10:49
Chapter: Chapter 6

loving it!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 04/26/09 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 6

Hah! The story hits its stride...

I'm kind of disappointed if Hermione has figured it out already - I was hoping for a longer Adin/Hermione buildup, but you can't have everything. I love that Luna knew.

I especially like the way Adin and Severus are battling it out. I think he'd have to become another person to believe he could be liked, and I hope he is able to carry it back with him to his adult life. (If he gets to go back to being an adult. )

I also like that he is starting to see the Gryffindors differently as well as himself. Being stuck in with them is clearly better for his mental health than being in the dungeons..

Reviewer: Lunia
Date: 04/26/09 5:33
Chapter: Chapter 6

Lol, the ending of this chapter was so funny, though not sure if it was meant to be. Can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 04/26/09 4:16
Chapter: Chapter 6

superb end of the chapter... love ur stories neway!!!

Reviewer: ruber08
Date: 04/25/09 22:31
Chapter: Chapter 5

Alright, alright, here it is a much begged for review. I love it, he seems perfectly in character (or at least the way I see Snape if he was trying to change). I also appreciate the hint toward the marriage law challenge without fully delving into it. Finally, I must stress that I usually do not read fics if they are not complete, I hate having to wait for chapters. Thus, it follows that my willingness to read this before completion is the highest praise I can give.

Reviewer: yellowpguin
Date: 04/25/09 21:17
Chapter: Chapter 5

Your story's awesome, dont stop. :]

Reviewer: Futrdirectorspaz
Date: 04/25/09 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 5

impatiently waiting for more....

Reviewer: snapesslove
Date: 04/24/09 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 5

hey, its awesome, please don't stop!

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 04/24/09 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 5

I am sorry that you are not getting the response this story deserves. I really like it. I am drawn in to the story by your style. I feel invested in the characters. I care what happens next. Thanks for the frequent updates.

Reviewer: loopyloopylupin
Date: 04/24/09 8:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

yay another fic from my very most fave author!!! (excluding jk of course!!!) soooo pleased with the speed in which this is being posted. i love your stories they are all fab, keep up the good work and don't slow down on the postings!!! xx

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 04/23/09 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 5

i love this story, however, i have to say... it's weird reading about someone masturbating

Reviewer: riesel522
Date: 04/23/09 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 5

I am enjoying the plot. I just hope it takes awhile to find a cure for the dark mark. I want to see Adin and Hermonie fall in love, even though Severus knows it shouldn't happen.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 04/23/09 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I was so glad when you started a new story, was nice to see because I think that you are a very excellent writer and your stories make complete sense. Please update really soon.

Reviewer: immortalbeloved
Date: 04/23/09 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 5

Oh, why must Ron always go back to Lavender? So far, this is a really good one! I've been wondering, did you get the idea from that new movie "17 Again?" Just curious! :)

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 04/23/09 17:23
Chapter: Chapter 5

Really? What sort of a response are you expecting? I've been finding the story interesting, if a little tiny bit on the crass side, but as I thought you had intended that, I let it slide.

Some of your other stories seem to me to have had a little less anger from Severus, and a little more romance, although I could be wrong. Perhaps seeing Severus struggling with being thirty something and seventeen at the same time is an entirely different pleasure for which some are not prepared or which does not interest some people in the same way?

I am enjoying the story. I might have given it a bit more time at the deaths of the younger Death Eaters, but I am not saying it needed that, necessarily, just that it was an option of doing it differently.

Reviewer: NikeIsis
Date: 04/23/09 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 5

Nice story. I would like to read about what happens next.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 04/22/09 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 4

I LOVE IT. This is awesome. I love it. And I love seeing things from snape's point of view, especially all the male body malfunctions. They make me LOL and they make me very grateful that I'm a girl and that our signs of arousal aren't visible!

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