The plot thickens. I love the premise of this story. Adin's struggle is wonderfully portrayed. Excellent!
oh Lord! don"t be too long with the next chapter.
lol... fantabulous!!!... cool end to da chapter!
cool work subversa keep it up!
Yes! Yes! Good ole fashioned snogging and some Hermione genius! Love the story, it's great, and I can't wait to see how he explains that, lol.
that last line, soooobusted, snape! i love this story, it is a perfect combination of humor and romance and even some angst. keep writing!!!
awesome......please update soon....
You're story's absolutely addictive!
Thank you, Subversa! Another great Severus and Hermione pairing. Please keep those chapters coming; looking forward to the next one.
Yea, another wonderful story from subversa. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the wonderful work.
This story is getting so good. When is Adin going to let Hermione be his girlfriend. Update really soon with the next chapter.
I waited all day for this chapter and I was definitely not disappointed! I really don't want Snape to be Snape again. I want him to stay as Adin! :)
So funny - h'es known her so long, he knows her so well, and yet he doesn't know her at all. Is he entirely forgetting that she was cryign for Snape at the first meeting?
Oddly, because I believe you're having him end up with Hermione some how, I am wishing with all my might that he and Harry can finally be friends. He really needs a plain old friend, too.
So.. as no one wanted to give you good and enough reviews I am doing my best.! I absolutely LOVE your story... itīs the first one since february or so... and it didnīt disappoint me in a way :D Itīs just gorgeous! The way you wrote it.. the plot is so great! I really love the idea of Sev being a teenager again ( different then all the time turner fics where Hermione just meets the younger Sev in the past..) and that no one knows who Adin really is... just got me goosebumps all over. And of course the masquercade ball.. it reminds me of "Cinderella Story" with Hilary Duff... *smile* great Idea! really! Just go one with the next chapters! I am keen on knowing how it will go on between the two of them!!
Subversa, I have loved your writing ever since you got me addicted to this ship back when I first stubled upon Master of Enchantment. Now I'm staying up much too late reading this latest bit of wonderful that you've produced, and it shocks me how much this last chapter completely reflects my life right now. ‘I’m not looking for a girlfriend—and I respect you too much to have been mucking about with you.’ This lovely line of douchebaggery was used on me not too long ago, and then the guy proceeded to act EXACTLY like Severus does in the rest of the chapter, including saying 'I'm too old for you.' Sadly, I don't think my particular jerk is secretly Severus Snape, but one can only hope.
Can't wait to read more! I hope Sev stops being a jerk really soon :)
Oh Hermione!! Be the genius you are and figure it out already! Lol, I just wonder what her reaction will be when she does...but it's obvious she wants him, too, so....hmmmm....they can't avoid each other, though, so more juicy encounters to follow, yes? :) Great story, love the quick updates, and the balance between the 17 year old and Prof. Snape.
This is such a great story. I hope you update this really soon. This story is really feeding my addiction. Keep updating with the next chapter.
Why in Merlin's name would Luna go to Severus Snape for advice/help?!?
So do we even know if it is possible for SS to remain as Adin? Didn't DD say he had never used the charm before?
He's given her another clue. Is "the cleverest witch of her age" smart enough to figure it out yet?
I love the frequent updates. It feeds my addiction. I want to know how this will play out but don't want it to end. Now who's confused??? That would be me!
Poor Man. I really feel for him. I sort of wish he coudl just stay 17 and get a do-over on the next 20 years of his life.