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Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 05/12/09 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 11

omg!! you cannot leave me in this suspense!! u are one of the best writer on mugglent i can't wait for an update. i love ur story's u dont take ages to update and ur story's are in great detail ur briil!
update soon

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 05/12/09 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 11

Cant wait for the next chapter update really soon.

Reviewer: MaddyJune
Date: 05/12/09 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 11

OH NOES! Discovery is near! Oh well, let's hope all goes well for these two :) Another awesome chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 05/11/09 7:19
Chapter: Chapter 11

I love the frequent updates. I am very curious as to how this will all work out. Will he want/ask to stay 17? Will Hermione accept him as 35? Looking foward to it.

Reviewer: Hazel_Glass
Date: 05/10/09 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 11

The plot thickens. I love the premise of this story. Adin's struggle is wonderfully portrayed. Excellent!

Reviewer: keller
Date: 05/10/09 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 11

oh Lord! don"t be too long with the next chapter.

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 05/10/09 12:31
Chapter: Chapter 11

lol... fantabulous!!!... cool end to da chapter!

Reviewer: wzee
Date: 05/10/09 8:07
Chapter: Chapter 11

cool work subversa keep it up!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 05/09/09 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 11

Yes! Yes! Good ole fashioned snogging and some Hermione genius! Love the story, it's great, and I can't wait to see how he explains that, lol.

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 05/09/09 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 11

that last line, soooobusted, snape! i love this story, it is a perfect combination of humor and romance and even some angst. keep writing!!!

Reviewer: ginerva9
Date: 05/09/09 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 11

awesome......please update soon....

Reviewer: yellowpguin
Date: 05/08/09 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 10

You're story's absolutely addictive!

Reviewer: acciomsgs
Date: 05/08/09 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thank you, Subversa! Another great Severus and Hermione pairing. Please keep those chapters coming; looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: keller
Date: 05/08/09 6:09
Chapter: Chapter 10

Yea, another wonderful story from subversa. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the wonderful work.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 05/06/09 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 10

This story is getting so good. When is Adin going to let Hermione be his girlfriend. Update really soon with the next chapter.

Reviewer: starfighterpilot
Date: 05/06/09 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 10

I waited all day for this chapter and I was definitely not disappointed! I really don't want Snape to be Snape again. I want him to stay as Adin! :)

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 05/06/09 9:44
Chapter: Chapter 10

So funny - h'es known her so long, he knows her so well, and yet he doesn't know her at all. Is he entirely forgetting that she was cryign for Snape at the first meeting?

Oddly, because I believe you're having him end up with Hermione some how, I am wishing with all my might that he and Harry can finally be friends. He really needs a plain old friend, too.

Reviewer: JosySnape
Date: 05/04/09 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 9

So.. as no one wanted to give you good and enough reviews I am doing my best.! I absolutely LOVE your story... itīs the first one since february or so... and it didnīt disappoint me in a way :D Itīs just gorgeous! The way you wrote it.. the plot is so great! I really love the idea of Sev being a teenager again ( different then all the time turner fics where Hermione just meets the younger Sev in the past..) and that no one knows who Adin really is... just got me goosebumps all over. And of course the masquercade ball.. it reminds me of "Cinderella Story" with Hilary Duff... *smile* great Idea! really! Just go one with the next chapters! I am keen on knowing how it will go on between the two of them!!

Reviewer: MaddyJune
Date: 05/03/09 22:28
Chapter: Chapter 9

Subversa, I have loved your writing ever since you got me addicted to this ship back when I first stubled upon Master of Enchantment. Now I'm staying up much too late reading this latest bit of wonderful that you've produced, and it shocks me how much this last chapter completely reflects my life right now. ‘I’m not looking for a girlfriend—and I respect you too much to have been mucking about with you.’ This lovely line of douchebaggery was used on me not too long ago, and then the guy proceeded to act EXACTLY like Severus does in the rest of the chapter, including saying 'I'm too old for you.' Sadly, I don't think my particular jerk is secretly Severus Snape, but one can only hope.

Can't wait to read more! I hope Sev stops being a jerk really soon :)

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 05/03/09 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 9

Oh Hermione!! Be the genius you are and figure it out already! Lol, I just wonder what her reaction will be when she does...but it's obvious she wants him, too, so....hmmmm....they can't avoid each other, though, so more juicy encounters to follow, yes? :) Great story, love the quick updates, and the balance between the 17 year old and Prof. Snape.

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