so sad. i really liked and appreciated the way you wrote this. it was adult but it was also mature and it wasn't like erotic fiction (like if you watch southpark you might've seen that episode where mr. garrison and mr. hand decide to quit teaching and write an erotic novel and if you remember this episode then you will probably remember his diction. no pun intended.)
but yea, i haven't reviewed in a while, sorry. but i really do love this story and even though i kno it has to end, i hope it never does.
I knew it!! Haha...
I knew she was gonna say his real name. I expected it to be in the throes of passion though, not afters. :)
Great chapter, even is Snape is back to being all 'I can't be with her!' Damn Snape-ish logic, grr.
Lord have mercy! Wonderful chapter,.
omg you cannot do tht to me!!
but go hermione for figuring it out
damn serverus hope he stays with her he has to stay with her!!!
it was brill!!
Very good. I was wondering when Miss Granger would reveal that she knew who he was. Now, can she win the battle to keep him, in what ever form he chooses?
Outside of the fact that this is an incredible story, I'm finding it absolutely amazing the way you captured the seventeen-year-old boy. Being seventeen myself, with a plethora of almost nauseatingly frank guy friends, I've found your portrayal of Adin/Severus to be spot on.
I'm so pumped for a new update, yay. :)
This is a great story you should keep at it. I would like to see the next chapter if you have written it and maybe we could be friends. My email address is email@example.com.
Cant wait for the next chapter x
oh - great chapter!
They're so friggin adorableeeeeee! Please let Sev stop being dumb, please let Sev stop being dum, please let Sev stop being dumb.
Can't wait to see how this unfolds. As I love all your writing, I love this entirely :)
well done its wicked
I feel as though I keep reading the same chapter over and over. Is there going to be any progression, or are they just going to keep doing the same dance? Isn't it time for another meeting with Dumbledore? What does he think of all this?
Oh the suspence. How is this going to work out? Why does it have to work out? Was does Adin ever have to go back to being Severus? If he is the last one with the mark and Voldemort is dead...then why fix it? Having the knowledge to fix the dark mark curse should it be needed in the future should be enough. Let Severus/Aidn be happy this time around. Ok I know what fun would there be in that? On with the story that isn't mine to change anyway;-)
wow what a quick update
now i cant wait for the next
cant wait untill hermione finds out
but i get the impression she already knows ^o) or is tht jsut me :S
update soon cant wait i love ur story's
I don't think I could come up with a better way to spend an evening! :)
omg!! you cannot leave me in this suspense!! u are one of the best writer on mugglent i can't wait for an update. i love ur story's u dont take ages to update and ur story's are in great detail ur briil!
Cant wait for the next chapter update really soon.
OH NOES! Discovery is near! Oh well, let's hope all goes well for these two :) Another awesome chapter, can't wait for more.
I love the frequent updates. I am very curious as to how this will all work out. Will he want/ask to stay 17? Will Hermione accept him as 35? Looking foward to it.