Reviews For This Time
Reviewer: MaddyJune
Date: 06/03/09 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 15


I can't tell you how happy I was to log on today and see that you'd posted a new chapter. I even skipped lunch just to read it :) I'm so glad Sev has finally decided to stop being an idiot and I really hope that this thing he 'has to do' doesn't get in the way of all the wonderful going on.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: mm5203
Date: 06/03/09 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 14

No! I want them to end up together forever. I love your story. sorry I didn't comment in each one but I couldn't find myself to stop reading it.

Reviewer: wiltedrose
Date: 05/31/09 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 14

omg thats so cute and so sad you freaking have to keep going on this fanfiction please im begging you dont give it up or discontinue it!!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 05/31/09 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 14

Why on earth can they never be together? I wouldn't put it past Dumbledore to have foreseen this very thing. Why he can't have her as Adin I understand, but she knows.

Yeah, yeah, noble idiocy... that nasty little streak of Gryffindor he's got that he can't ever get rid of...

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 05/29/09 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 14

so sad. i really liked and appreciated the way you wrote this. it was adult but it was also mature and it wasn't like erotic fiction (like if you watch southpark you might've seen that episode where mr. garrison and mr. hand decide to quit teaching and write an erotic novel and if you remember this episode then you will probably remember his diction. no pun intended.)

but yea, i haven't reviewed in a while, sorry. but i really do love this story and even though i kno it has to end, i hope it never does.

Reviewer: sufferance
Date: 05/29/09 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 14

I knew it!! Haha...

I knew she was gonna say his real name. I expected it to be in the throes of passion though, not afters. :)

Great chapter, even is Snape is back to being all 'I can't be with her!' Damn Snape-ish logic, grr.

Reviewer: keller
Date: 05/29/09 11:08
Chapter: Chapter 14

Lord have mercy! Wonderful chapter,.

Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 05/29/09 7:13
Chapter: Chapter 14

omg you cannot do tht to me!!
but go hermione for figuring it out
damn serverus hope he stays with her he has to stay with her!!!
update soon
it was brill!!

Reviewer: Marie Granger
Date: 05/29/09 7:08
Chapter: Chapter 14

Very good. I was wondering when Miss Granger would reveal that she knew who he was. Now, can she win the battle to keep him, in what ever form he chooses?

Reviewer: sufferance
Date: 05/27/09 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 13

Outside of the fact that this is an incredible story, I'm finding it absolutely amazing the way you captured the seventeen-year-old boy. Being seventeen myself, with a plethora of almost nauseatingly frank guy friends, I've found your portrayal of Adin/Severus to be spot on.

I'm so pumped for a new update, yay. :)

Reviewer: Severus_lover
Date: 05/27/09 10:14
Chapter: Chapter 13

This is a great story you should keep at it. I would like to see the next chapter if you have written it and maybe we could be friends. My email address is

Reviewer: yellowpguin
Date: 05/22/09 22:38
Chapter: Chapter 13

Cant wait for the next chapter x

Reviewer: keller
Date: 05/21/09 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 13

oh - great chapter!

Reviewer: MaddyJune
Date: 05/20/09 18:29
Chapter: Chapter 13

They're so friggin adorableeeeeee! Please let Sev stop being dumb, please let Sev stop being dum, please let Sev stop being dumb.

Can't wait to see how this unfolds. As I love all your writing, I love this entirely :)

Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 05/20/09 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 13

well done its wicked
update soon!!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 05/19/09 22:29
Chapter: Chapter 13

Sweet, really.

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 05/18/09 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 12

I feel as though I keep reading the same chapter over and over. Is there going to be any progression, or are they just going to keep doing the same dance? Isn't it time for another meeting with Dumbledore? What does he think of all this?

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 05/16/09 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 12

Oh the suspence. How is this going to work out? Why does it have to work out? Was does Adin ever have to go back to being Severus? If he is the last one with the mark and Voldemort is dead...then why fix it? Having the knowledge to fix the dark mark curse should it be needed in the future should be enough. Let Severus/Aidn be happy this time around. Ok I know what fun would there be in that? On with the story that isn't mine to change anyway;-)

Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 05/15/09 16:26
Chapter: Chapter 12

wow what a quick update
now i cant wait for the next
cant wait untill hermione finds out
but i get the impression she already knows ^o) or is tht jsut me :S
update soon cant wait i love ur story's

Reviewer: immortalbeloved
Date: 05/15/09 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 12

I don't think I could come up with a better way to spend an evening! :)

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