this is the most addictive fanfic. i've ever read. It's amazing! i can't wait to finish it!
nice character development. but towards the end it seems to have faded away. amazing job on the whole =]
WOW! Talk about a novel plot twist! I've read a ton of Sevmione fics and I've really got to hand it to you for picking what is hands down the most original and yet obvious idea. Brilliant in its simplicity, not to mention the writing quality is very, very good. I have a feeling this is going to be one of those nights where I stay up until I've read the whole fic, but I get the feeling this is totally worth it.
love your plot
love your writing style
This story is sounding really good can't wait to read the rest!!
This was such an amazing story... by far the best SS/HG i have read.. and i will not read another because this is exactly how i want to picture them being! You are an exceptional author and i encourage you to never stop writing stories.
Amazing story! Can't say anymore than that. Superb!
Trully a very interesting story, To take what one would assume Snapes emotions as a 37 year old man and put them in a 17 year old body and make it beleivable, amazing
very well done
this is very well written and quite an engaing story
"It was a filthy tactic and one that was difficult to counter."
*applauds* brilliant just brilliant! 5/5 I had my face glued to the screen. I just could't stop reading! so captivating! ^_^
...stubborn old fool....
I'm in love!
Wow! I simply LOVED it! You took an original idea and plot and made it into a truly wonderful story. I positively LOVED it! Have I mentioned how much I LOVE this story? LOL! Keep up the truly fantastic work!!~Jen
It's very good so far.
Very well done. Nice way to end the story too. Please continue writing for the sake of my SS/HG fantasies. =]
I absolutely loved this fic! Very, very well written.
I am loving this!
Great story. I like the humour, and I love the way Severus gets a new life...