I absolutely loved this story!!! I thought you did an excellent job of incorporating both Severus and Adin's personalities into the one person, and your story also had the benefit of keeping me completely surprised as to what the ending would be. I truly could not figure out what would happen in the end, which is a rarity (imho) in fan fic. Thank you so much for this great story!
And now the former Death Eater suddently becomes a gent... Poor Herms, I bet she was REALLY hoping he found a way towards his ignoble tendencies!!! Hehehe....
Great chapter!!! ^.^
hey thanks for the story , it is possible one of the best snape and hermione stories i have read . . . .thanks again and good luck to you for writing more stories in the future. . . . bye
Uhhhhhoooo!!! Spicy moment there!! I could almost savour that kiss that wasn't!!!! Damn!!! Pooor Sev!!!!
Loved this chapter!!!
Eagerto read about some face-sucking and tongue wrestling!
Whoolly cow!!! I think someone got into trouble tonight!!!!!
And I mean both, Herms and Sev!!!!!!
Maybe she'll let it slide or think she was being silly?
Maybe she had a bit too much to drink (which would explain why on Merlin's name she ended up in her date's room in the first place!!)
Only one way to find out... I'll keep reading!!!
Loving the story by the minute! Especially Snape's thoughts comparing peer acceptance with shaking rose brushes during the Yule Ball. That bit was just brilliant!!! ;)
I must appollogise for not reviewing before... I'm a bad, bad reader!!!
I like the story very much! My fave are the woes and treats of an older man going back to his younger self... Very juicy and funny part of the story.
The gryphon tattoed girl... it's Herms... we all know that. It just HAS to be her!! ^.^ Right? Anyhow, I like the way Adin seems to be much more bold and spunky than Severus. And how he seems to be "the new hunk" in Gryffindor.
AND you' re putting him in the Quidditch team. Interesting!! I wonder how that will turn out!
I'd like to see Sev interacting with some of his former colleagues, though, just for the fun of it... Althought I supose that would sot of endanger his alliby... Too bad!
Kuddos for a very original plotline and a nicely moving Severus/Hermione. I particularly like his characaterization. It seems very spot on and cannon compilant! ^_^
I really like this! First time ever on Mugglenet's FanFiction, and it's well-written! I can't believe I didn't stop here sooner. These stories are such a breath of fresh air to the poorly written ones on other sites.
I really like the plot--and I'm only on chapter one! Thanks you!!!
thank you for pulling me into this story so completly. I could not stop reading. very well done
This story was very sweet. It’s the first story I read on the pairing – I’ve always stayed well clear, but now I’m sold. I simply loved the way you had Severus determined to try again – shower twice a day, indeed! And I adore a happy ending. Very creative, and I simply love that you gave the Potions master a second chance.
you write your stories exactly as I do.
I tend to start with the stanza of a poem, but most often the lyric of a song to set the mood. Haha. (: And I am enjoying the story so far! Very creative!
Oh my goodness!!! Iloved it. I am so happy you ended it this way. Ahh, I'm so happy I read this.
Oh. I almost cried too. That was very good. You have my heart all the way.
I love this chapter. It was very well written.
this is so cute! i love it. it's much cuter when you actually listen to the songs that are listed at the top of the chapters
it's so cute! i love it... i think that it's even cuter while listening to already gone by kelly clarkson
this is the most addictive fanfic. i've ever read. It's amazing! i can't wait to finish it!
nice character development. but towards the end it seems to have faded away. amazing job on the whole =]
WOW! Talk about a novel plot twist! I've read a ton of Sevmione fics and I've really got to hand it to you for picking what is hands down the most original and yet obvious idea. Brilliant in its simplicity, not to mention the writing quality is very, very good. I have a feeling this is going to be one of those nights where I stay up until I've read the whole fic, but I get the feeling this is totally worth it.
love your plot
love your writing style
This story is sounding really good can't wait to read the rest!!