Reviews For Coup de Grace
Reviewer: SGozzy
Date: 02/27/12 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hormones

Well writen, and to be fair, I understand why the others didn't want the girls to go. Very good start, but please continue as I hate really good stories to have cliffhangers so early on (I can tell this will be great!) :P

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I'll try to write this one, I really will. I'm just kinda stuck so hard on this fic. :o Let me see...

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 08/16/10 7:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hormones

Hey Di!

I loved the first chapter! The characters were really well written, especially Ron. They were really IC. But I really wanna read on ahead, so when are you gonna update? I'm really looking forward to the events that are gonna follow.

Nadia

Author's Response: It's been more than a year and I had no idea this one had a review. :o :o I'm thinking I shouldn't leave this one half-way. Let me see... Thank you for the review, sweetie!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 07/07/09 7:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hormones

Awww, poor Ron. He does seem to be bearing the brunt of everyone's emotions - Hermione, Rose and even Ginny. I loved it when Kingsley just said yes straight away. Those boys should learn that when their wives say what's going to happen - they need to just say 'Yes, ma'am!'

Joking aside, this is a good solid first chapter - where you've set the scene and the characters up very well. Ron, in particular, is wonderfully written but then you do know him rather well. Your Trio - plus Ginny - are very IC yet still your own creations.

Well Done, Pooja. I can't wait to read the rest especially as I know how much this story means to you.

Carole

Author's Response: Carole! *huggles* Thank you so much! I do agree about Ron. Hehe. He's taking all the hormones. When I was younger, I used to think that the stuff about women being hormonal during pregnancy was a joke :D. Hehe. It was bio which taught me some of their reactions. Thanks for the review! I don't know about the update... I'm going through an enormous writer's block! :(

Reviewer: harryronhermionie
Date: 04/30/09 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hormones

This seems to be a good story based on 26/11 I will follow this and see how u integrate harry potter into the biggest attack against our country

Author's Response: Haha, I reviewed my own story before replying to this, by mistake. Anyway, thank you for your review!

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