Reviewer: herm_own_ninny13
Date: 04/01/09 16:45
Chapter: Prologue - How they met.

I incredibly siriusly liked it. You are almost as gifted a writer as Stephenie Meyer. I am awed by your immense talent. If only you were as good as Stephenie Meyer. She is liek soo goood omgeee!fangirl.

Love, Maggie.

Author's Response: *squeeeeees* I have a fan! Gee, like Stephanie Meyer. Like, WOW!

Reviewer: eviltwin2000
Date: 04/01/09 16:20
Chapter: Prologue - How they met.

Nice. What happens next?

Author's Response: Errr... no idea. Something cliche'd I should think...

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 04/01/09 15:33
Chapter: Prologue - How they met.

Haha, Carole, good one! Rolling eyes! And I haven't read anything but Twilight in the series, but I do know that Bella is a vampire in Breaking Dawn.

LOL... Can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: The rest! *gulp* errr... quickly scrawls something in a note book - *gulps again* Okay.... *hides*

Ta, Poozy-darls. love Carole xxx

Reviewer: LizzyT
Date: 04/01/09 15:24
Chapter: Prologue - How they met.

Please write more, I really do want to know what happens next...

Author's Response: Can't you guess? Their love produces Rosalburga Aphrodite Black .... and she's the same age as Teddy Lupin... (ignore timeline difficulties, Vamp babies grow at different rates) ... so she'll be at Hogwarts... and she's bound to take a trip into the Forbidden Forest and find that 'stone thingy'.

Reviewer: youaremylifenow
Date: 04/01/09 13:32
Chapter: Prologue - How they met.

lol This was so funny! Care to update, please?

Tiny nitpick - Vampire have eyes that are red, black, or golden. Or if their new 'vegitarians' (i spelled that wrong) they would have auburn eyes. Rosalie, therefore, couldn't have had blue eyes. *don't hurt me*

I really enjoyed your fic!

Author's Response: Oh yeah.... Ha ha. I'd completely forgotten their eye colour... will go and change now. That's not good is it? I mean their eye colour is kinda important. Thank you so much for reviewing. Hmm, updates... well you never know. Carole xxx

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