I loved everything about this fic except for the ending - it seemed kind of unfinished to me. Anyways, good work!
awwwww, this is sweet. I actually like the different narrators, it adds a nice touch!
Sweet. You portrayed them well.
aww that was cute!
Aw! That was great, you got all the the characters to a T. It was a great idea, writing about what happened after harry and Remus' fight.