I really love tis poem. I got goosebumpe while I read it. I love the ending. I love the middle. And I love the begining. I just love all of it. When he said "Kill me. I won't live without her.", is when I got the goosebumps. I think you did a great job on this poem.
Author's Response: Awwww :) Thanks! It is a little goosebump-inducing isn't it? ;) Hope to hear from you soon!! --Maddy(:
I love the last line! It is such a sad poem (and story), but it gives it a light of hope. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I'm definitely a Remus/Tonks shipper, but you should totally check out my other fic (:. Thanks for your awesome review :D --Maddy(:
Wow! That was really intense! I'm not a huge Remus/Tonks reader, but that was great! It was really unique, and I thought it was clever of you to write about their final moments, because I wished we all could have said goodbye (not that I wanted to see their deaths, but you know what I mean). Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Check out my other story, I Think This Love is Altering my Brain. :D
Beautiful. I think it captured the scene perfectly. I cried when they died in DH, and almost did reading this poem as well.
Author's Response: Omg :D Im so happy hahaa! I wrote this poem because I needed to write a poem in a form like this and I always wondered how they died....I didn't think anyone liked it that much though. I'll try and work on some of my other stories to get them more up to date! I MADE SOMEONE CRY :D YAAAAAY