Wow, this was really great. I love how well written the whole piece was and the plot behind it. Neville's thought about his parents never crossed my mind, but it does make sense that he would wonder when insanity would hit him. I loved how Luna was the one to see him in the hospital wing (because I still would have loved to have seen them together). With the Hufflepuffs joining in the story, it really gave the sense of unity amongst Dumbledore's Army, even through this troubled time. I also liked the mention how not everyone was on their side. It was interesting how the group waited for their fate (I also liked the subtleness of Hannah laying her head on Neville's shoulder) and you really captured Neville's character with his fear of Snape. I liked how Snape did, in his own way, give back the papers and nothing happened to the group. Overall, extremely well executed, with both the writing and the very well thought-out story.

Author's Response: I glad you like it. I hope you read and review more stories!

I really enjoyed reading this. It's an excellent portrayal of Neville, and a different view on Severus's time at Hogwarts as a Headmaster. Thanks for sharing this :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. As the winning story for this contest, it has also been nominated to be made into an AudioFic. I hope you will be on the lookout for that as well.