Great story so far! Can't wait to see what will happen...
interesting start. I'd like to see where this goes...
hey this is pretty good. kind of a cliff hanger. email me when u post more i want to see where the story goes. email@example.com. much appreciated mate
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have a new chapter up soon, and I really mean it this time. ;)
What a wonderful start! Only the first chapter and I'm already hungry for more :D
Author's Response: Hey, thank you! :D I'm working on the second chapter right now. Frankly, I'm super excited about this myself. (: