Reviews For My Troubled Tyrant
Reviewer: goldink
Date: 08/05/14 20:06
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

It's me, Fenrir_Confringo--Avery, from 2009. I don't remember my password for my old account, so goldink it is! I have been telling anyone worth telling (Harry Potter fans at least) about this fic, and that it could be the tale behind Tom Riddle that JKR needs to buy from you to make his back story! Again, I cried when Keedie died. I've never loved a fanfiction this much. The attention to detail is inspiring, and the sheer flow of the story, the planning and all, is amazing. It is my greatest wish that you undertstand how this fic has affected me, and I know for sure, has affected anyone else who has read it. I hope people still are. I hope HP fanfiction is still "cool", and I hope that it remains as such. I thank you, Belledeg, for such a wonderful story, filled with everything a true original fanfiction should be. Your story inspires hope in all of us Potterheads that stories derived from our beloved Harry Potter can still instill fear, hope and, of course! LOVE in all of us. Tom Riddle's story makes Harry Potter complete. I love this. Thank you! --Avery

Author's Response: Thank you!! Xx

Reviewer: CEE13
Date: 03/24/13 8:38
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

I came to check if Thievery had been updated, ended up reading this, and I am heartbroken! What an amazing story. I always thought there was more to Tom Riddle.

Reviewer: NessaK94
Date: 02/18/13 21:30
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

ARGH! I'm not sure how I feel about this, now that it's over. I love that Tom has a heart, I hate that his only hope of redemption was killed, I'm disappointed that Tom didn't learn to get on with Dumbledore, and I'm dissatisfied with the way it all ended - no redemption, no Keedie, no child, no happy ending.

It is for these reasons that make this a great story. I applaud your work. Well done, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewer: My_halo
Date: 11/23/12 16:48
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

Excuse me, miss?
I love this story, so, so much!
I actually made an account here just so I can read it, and I was sobbing as I read this story!
It is sad and beautiful and enchanting
I love it with my very being.
But can I, please, please, please, ask something?
When she tells him to sleep in the they be together in the end?
Or does he stay without her even yond the grave.
Isn't it just despairingly heartbreaking?
Oh I hope their fates put them together!
I love you, creator of Keedie and Tom!

Reviewer: AccioFirebolt21065
Date: 08/22/12 17:40
Chapter: Goodbye My Lover

I cried ,I acutally cried when Keedie died :'(

Author's Response: Yay! That's what we like to hear.

Reviewer: AccioFirebolt21065
Date: 08/22/12 16:13
Chapter: Just Like You

I just love how you put Miss Rowling's character in it and how it all fits :)

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! I tried hard to make it all fit! X

Reviewer: AccioFirebolt21065
Date: 08/22/12 9:03
Chapter: Defying Gravity

I'm addicted to this story! :)

Reviewer: AccioFirebolt21065
Date: 08/21/12 16:18
Chapter: Shake It

This is absolutely fantastic! You should become a writer , really .

Reviewer: castrolovee
Date: 06/14/12 18:38
Chapter: Prologue--Big Bright Beautiful World

Oh my goodness what an amazing story. I actually came across your stories on my search for an Andromeda and Ted Tonks story so I unfortunately read MFF first -_- lol However with your little hints and such and to get a clear understand of the backstory of the Holmwoods, I thought I'd read MTT. Obviously not many of us Harry potter fans are a big fan of Tom Riddle and I have honestly only read one Tom Riddle love fanfiction before but I believe, like you quoted in your story, "Evil is not born, It is created." In canon, it is always mentioned that Tom Riddle never loved. I find that unrealistic even though JK Rowling explains his inability to express love is due to the fact that he was conceived from a love potion. Sometimes I feel like she may have left any type of affection towards anyone in Tom's flashbacks so that the readers never felt any pity for him as well. I highly enjoyed your story and I believe it touched on a topic that is often never mentioned and I love fanfictions like this which make me think.. "What if.." sorry for all the rambling but I saw that you like reviews so here is my attempt at one, I hope it suffices ;)

Author's Response: Thank you for a lovely paragraph and not just an emoticon. Really glad you took the time to read!

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 03/29/12 0:31
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

Hi this is a question that I just realized about Tom and Keedie. He went after the wand but not the stone because if he did he would have seen her. Why didn't he? by the way loved the story it was amazing I wished JK Rowling made Voldemort have a back story that was tragic like yours. Because I do believe evil is created not born.

Reviewer: Jezza0600
Date: 01/11/12 0:27
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

This story was so wonderful...I don't know how you did it but I find myself crying...a lot...This is beautiful written and I loved Keedie, I loved her backstory, I loved your other characters, and above all I loved Tom. The ending letter kinda killed me, I laughed, cried (very much so at the end) and all because of this amazing story. You should be proud, and Keedie will always be in my mind when I read or watch HP now. Seriously. xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, I'm glad you liked it and liked Keedie. This was my first story, so it meas a lot Xxxx

Reviewer: dinkodewams
Date: 11/29/11 20:50
Chapter: The Epilogue--My Immortal

wow this is ______________
No words can describe it. I laughed I cried, I sighed and felt my heart break. This is why story sites were invented so in the off chance that someone like you would come along and write a masterpiece like this.

Author's Response: Such a lovely thing to say, thank you so much. I'm so happy you read the whole story, that you enjoyed it and that you took the time to review. Cheers! x

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 10/28/11 2:00
Chapter: Prologue--Big Bright Beautiful World

Keedie... Interesting name but I think from what I've read so far that it's good for her. I like this story a lot, and I'm glad it's done so I don't have to wait for updates!

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/10/11 3:20
Chapter: Wandering Child

so good! i love all the references and forshadowings of the book!

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 6:28
Chapter: Cruel Man

I LOVE THIS. cant descirbe it any other way. but you're the best!

Author's Response: Thank you! Keep up the R&R ing :D

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 5:57
Chapter: Bring Him Home

I LOVE THIS. honestly cant describe it any other way

Author's Response: lol, thank you. Please keep reviewing; I love to hear from people :D

Author's Response: lol, thank you. Please keep reviewing; I love to hear from people :D

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 5:13
Chapter: Dark Blue

ugh i loveeee this. you're the best!

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 3:26
Chapter: Right Here In My Arms

team tom!!! never before have i sympathized with tom but now i will forever. i wish this was real life!!

Author's Response: That's the goal; glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 3:07
Chapter: I Don't Know How To Love Him!

obsessed. honestly. best fanfic EVER.

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: silverpatronus24
Date: 10/09/11 1:52
Chapter: Outside Looking In

this is seriously the best fanfic i've ever read. so good.

Author's Response: I'm very touched, thank you :D

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