Reviews For Trickster
Reviewer: Laura22
Date: 12/08/12 0:04
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

Oh my, just finished this story and can't wait to start the sequel! Amazing, amazing, amazing. They're all just like I imagine them! And the confusing back-and-forth relationship between James and Lily is just perfect, considering how they used to be!

Reviewer: dspotter
Date: 10/15/12 4:33
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

Don't mind me, I'm just dying.
STAP IT PETER. STAP IT SNAPE.
Anyhoo, I really loved this story. I had actually read part of Stars Apart last year (ish) and had no idea it was a sequel. A lot of things make more sense now and I'm going to reread it! Yay!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 08/29/12 20:30
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

This story brightens up my day. Going through some really tough and long exams and have been reading the chapters one by one in the moments of respite. Enjoyed it alot.

Author's Response: haha it's funny, because that's kind of when i wrote it too, during study breaks :) good luck on your exams!!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 08/10/12 0:34
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

I don't know if I've ever reviewed, but I might have. I came back to reread this 'cause I forgot that I had already read it! :P
Anyway, I'm only singing praise! This was fantastic- off to the sequel I go! Just curious, are you planning another one to make this a trilogy?
Great job! I love your writing! :D :D :D
~H.H.

Author's Response: awww i'm so glad you like it :) and yeah actually the third one is in the works now!! i'm just waiting until i've written a few more chapters to start posting it--i wanna have a buffer so i'll be able to do regular updates even when life gets crazy :)

Reviewer: It-was-the-nargles
Date: 08/07/12 18:50
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

I really enjoyed this story, about to read the sequel now!

Reviewer: TheSarcasticHermione
Date: 10/03/11 15:39
Chapter: Study Breaks

My friend recommended this to me and so far it seems pretty epic. Good job :)

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 09/12/11 18:44
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

This was really, really good. I can totally see it all being canon. And I LOVED he bit about wormtail not feeling safe, and that's why he betrayed them. Well done.

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 09/12/11 18:44
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

This was really, really good. I can totally see it all being canon. And I LOVED he bit about wormtail not feeling safe, and that's why he betrayed them. Well done.

Reviewer: longbottom11
Date: 09/01/11 15:44
Chapter: Alliances

Love the Charlottes Web Reference!!

Reviewer: AmuAiIkuto193
Date: 08/28/11 21:06
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

I really liked this whole story. I can tell that it was planned out the way Lily's patronus wasn't shown as a doe until after they were together. And I like the way you wrote Peter. I think in a lot of fics people don't really act as if he is one of the marauders because they don't like him, but he was included with them and was a good friend to them for a while. They treat him equally.

Reviewer: mylifeisoriginal
Date: 08/14/11 19:30
Chapter: Study Breaks

I finished this story earlier today, and I just finished what you have of the sequel and WOW! I'm currently obsessed with Lily and James fics and these are perfect. I love how you kept us on our toes with waiting for them to date already. Plus, I love the comedic action with the Mauraders. Especially Sirius, you portray him perfectly in this stories! Great work, can't wait for the rest of Stars Apart!

Reviewer: ginnytonksandluna4ever
Date: 08/10/11 23:14
Chapter: Wide Awake, It's Morning

i love this sooooooooooooooooooo much its the bestest most awesomest fic
written ever!!!!

Author's Response: awwwww thanks so much!!

Reviewer: ginnytonksandluna4ever
Date: 08/10/11 21:24
Chapter: Action and Reaction

i absolutely love the end to this chapter!!!! you are the best author i've read by far!!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 16:28
Chapter: Action and Reaction

I love Remus! Running off (no need to be stupid, that's the brave thing!) when the 'explosion' was going to hit.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 15:36
Chapter: Things Fall Apart

'and he glided away' ha. I love Remus too much.... and another thing - trying and failing to look small. You're a big boy, Sirius! Stand up and Face it !

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 12:40
Chapter: Close Encounters

"Blinken likes hats," James informed her.

I loved that part soo much. This is my favorite chapter, because you don't see Sirius doing stupid things when he's not 'drunk'.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 12:28
Chapter: Crimes and Misdemeanors

A drenched Flitwick attempted to compose himself, his head smoking. Very, very nice.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 12:05
Chapter: Hatching Plans

I absolutely loved 'eyes smoldering' it really brings a picture into how she was feeling - that whole 'show, not tell' thing again, right? But my favorite part.... “Women want to be treated with kindness and respect. It’s probably not to late for James to redeem himself. Self-confidence is the most important tool when wooing a member of the opposite sex, and a little politeness goes a long way. And don’t forget, a smile is the sexiest thing you can wear.”

The other three stared at him. Sirius raised an eyebrow. “Wormtail thinks you’re sexy,” he informed James.

I enjoyed that part too much.... if you didn't read some self-help books yourself, that's impressive!

Another favorite part...He looked at her blankly for a moment. “I—um, yeah, I…not bad, yours?”

Behind him, Peter murmured under his breathe, “Smooth.” James aimed a kick at him, but missed, and hit the leg of the table. Plates rattled. Lily seemed not to notice.

“It was all right. Get your O.W.L. scores? How’d that Potions tutoring help?”

“Well, I don’t think even extra lessons with Slughorn could have helped me out on that one, but I passed! Although I think the fact that I finished the exam at all means that I Exceeded Expectations…”

Lily laughed lightly, and James grinned at her. Behind him, Sirius was not even trying to disguise his shock, his mouth hanging open. Remus elbowed him, leaning forward to eavesdrop shamelessly as Lily asked James what classes he was continuing with for his sixth year.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 7:31
Chapter: We Might As Well Be Strangers

'What exactly are you trying to do to the ceiling?' I love that part. Keep writing Stars Apart!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/11/11 6:48
Chapter: Dangerous Liaisons

“We need to, um, borrow some of your potion,” said Sirius, beaming at him.

I love that part so much. I love this chapter, I love Remus. I especially love how Lily walks straight into the bookshelf - I have the special talent enabling me to run, full-speed, into a cinder-block wall and give myself a concussion.

I love the relationship of the Marauders, especially Remus. I love that he's so calm, 'I'll have to get back to you on that,' when his best friend just poisoned himself.

I love nearly everything about this chapter.

The one thing I don't like is how James sits on Lily's table. I think this is in character, so it is correct, but I still think it was rude and innapropriate.

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