Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/05/09 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 1-A Modest Proposal

I really like this story. The idea is good. I always feel bad for Harry when he finishes off Voldemort. He goes off all alone to be by himself which doesn't do any good. But I like how in this one there's not much of that and he gets out of it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: I actually have a dozen or so more chapters written already, but my BETA readers haven't finished with them yet, and I"m not going to bother submitting them before they've been proofread. In the meantime, I'm writing more, but it could be some time before everything gets settled. Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: gerberb
Date: 03/13/09 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 1-A Modest Proposal

Nice chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/12/09 9:57
Chapter: Chapter 1-A Modest Proposal

love it, well done i like where your taking the story i can't wait to see how harry and the gang get along here in america.

Author's Response: I have about a dozen chapters written, but it may be a while until they're posted. My beta is taking a well deserved break and I'm not bothering with submitting them before he's had a go. Thanks for the review.

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