That was a sweet ending. Of course I wanted to see Gryffindor win but since it was Lex's birthday it was good that she caught the snitch. I love snapdragons. When I was little, my Grandma taught me how to "snap" them.
Love it so sweet and cute
Author's Response: Thank you. I'd almost forgotten this story, so it's always great to receive reviews for older stories. ~Carole~
oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is sooooooooooooooo cute! i love fluffy stories! they just make you feel good! yay!!!!!!!!! =D
Author's Response: Thank you
Perhaps I should do more fluff. *ponders Charlie and Lex first date scenario*
I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate the review.
I want more! Please? :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. Um, it was really only intended as a oneshot as a present for someone but... hmm, perhaps I could write some more.
Thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Carole xxx
omg that was such a sweet story! I really luved it! i thought it was creative how u added tonks into it! Ur a great writer keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Tonks and Charlie are in another fic of mine (they were at Hogwarts at the same time) so I couldn't not include her. *smiles* Carole xxx
Oh gosh, Carole. That was amazing. I cant' believe something so amazing was written for me. Like, seriously.
“Alexandria, you really must eat something,” urged Davey Snellson, the Hufflepuff Quidditch Captain.
Haha, I read that and was like, wait, what is she calling me? And then I was like, well at least it isn't Alexandra. And then I saw the Lex. Lol
The sound of two girls singing could be heard coming from the Hufflepuff dressing room. He recognised one as that of Tonks and the other was their Keeper, Olivia Hutton.
Yep yep. Sounds like a couple of people I may know. Haha, the way you write Tonks is brilliant, btw. Lol, so in character and all. Yet so... In chracter for a certain someone else ;) Teehee.
“Hmm, that’s right,” murmured Lex distractedly. She was looking at Charlie ahead of her and thinking that his hair reminded her of the inside of that most perfect snapdragon she’d seen in Professor Sprout’s garden. She smiled as she remembered meeting Charlie there, by accident, and the stupid conversation she’d initiated about the flowers.
Lol, you know me so well. I always say 'Hmm' when I'm distracted on AIM. And I also always start stupid, random, pointless conversations with guys I fancy. Of course, you would know that, as it's all I ever talk about. Lol.
“And never been kissed,” she blurted out and then reddened.
Lol. I love you :P
She lifted her face to the sky, and he could see the sun picking out some reddish tints in her dark brown hair. “Who needs wings?”
“When we have brooms!”
Haha, best line, fullstop. The reddish brown tints, along with the eyecolour, you amaze me with your listening skills. Haha.
And the who needs wings, when we have brooms. Haha. Brilliant bit. I remember that conversation well :P
“Lex,” called Tonks as she walked round the corner.,
Lol, you put extra punctuation there.
Lol, Carole, Man. I love this, it is going straight in my favourites. Haha, and if you ever feel to add to it, like another oneshot, I really wouldn't mind, lol.
This is brilliant, I have a drabble, a audio fic and a oneshot, now.
I feel so special.
I loveeeee you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Lex. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. OOOPs to the punctuation - I shall amend straight away. 'Who needs Wings?' Well, that's your line really, I just borrowed it.
And I also always start stupid, random, pointless conversations with guys I fancy. - ha ha, don't we all?
You're very welcome by the way. It was fun to write.
*Squiels* I love this story. The look back line was just to good...did you get that off Charmed?
The never been kissed bit...Awww!...'BOUT BLOODY TIME! The whole story I was thinking, "They better kiss or Carole is just cruel and unusual."
If you decide to write another one shot to go along with this I wont complain. *hint hint* ;)
Author's Response: Thank you Sandy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't write a lot of fluff so it's great to have such a positive review. The look back line.... I've never watched Charmed, so not from there.
Another one shot - let me guess, it would feature an Australian witch and a Weasley twin (or two)!
Ta for R and R'ing, Carole xxx