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Name: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x (Signed) · Date: 04/12/09 15:37 · For: The Soda Machine Disaster
Aww; I love it :D
The whole Knut this was very clever :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!! I'm so happy you liked my poem!! :-)

Name: Sainyn Swiftfoot (Signed) · Date: 03/30/09 4:36 · For: The Soda Machine Disaster
Haha, that was a good one! It was a all an April Fool's prank? Nice!

It spittered and it sputtered.
It fittered and it futtered.
Sparks flew here and there
And there and where
And everywhere.

BEST LINE. EVER. I just love the total Dr Seuss quality to that stanza... Amazing! This would definitely be my favourite stanza.

Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!! I'm glad you liked my poem! I was definitely going Dr. Seuss during that line, I am pretty sure I was thinking of him when I wrote it! I'm glad you noticed the "subtle" tribute to him!!!

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