I'm a massive fan of next generation stories, and your's seems very sound; carry on and I'm sure we'll all enjoy reading it as much as you do writing!
this is a good atory line. and you have started quite well. So carry on please.
please continue wth your story, I liked your first chapter
The story sounds good so far. It would be just like Harry to be the bigger person and put aside all school grudges. I can see a friendship developing between the younger Potter and Malfoy.
I totally love your premis. Please continue the story. Thanks you for sharing your ideas.
This was really good, you should definetly continue! Looking forward to seeing what happens =] Until next time; Cheers!