Reviews For The Soul Stealer
Reviewer: Black-Sand
Date: 03/02/09 5:16
Chapter: Once Upon A Time

G'day Lexxy

I liked your story. Especially the "Stupidly brave or bravely stupid" line. Looking forward to the next chapter!

...xXxLove SandyxXx...

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you :)

I liked that line. [Blushes] Lol, one of my favs :P And lol, you may have to wait a while. [Looks at piles of work] But thank you :D

-Lexx

Reviewer: inspirations
Date: 03/01/09 11:07
Chapter: Once Upon A Time

Lex, this was … >.> wow. I love the narration - it’s like that typical of these sorts of tales, which makes it all the more enchanting. Further more, I liked the little prologuey bit you did before ‘once-upon-a-time’. It was effective, and set the scene well. And your use of language. Ah, the language. XD A lot of the phrases you used were really good, and helped to weave that bit of magic into the story.

It was rare to ever see these men again. - I love how you left this out of any paragraph. It really made it stand out, and made the tone slightly darker, you know?

Just like all those returning men, left alive without living. - the last line, and by far my favourite. It makes it out as if the same thing has happened to her as all the men, but it’s her doing it, right? Haha, I know that because I think I visited the title thread. Plus, the title.

Good work. x

[ps: I liked the summary too. You are good at them]

Author's Response: Ahh >.>

Such an amazing reveiw. Thank you, lol, seriously.

I'm glad you liked the language :) That took me forever with an online theosaurus, lol. But I wanted it to sound like a real fairy tale. So yeah, I'm glad you liked that :D

Hehe, I liked that too! Lol, and the last line was my favourite. At first we thought it was incomplete, but I felt it should stay the way it was. More effective, I thought :)

Yeah, lol. Just give away my plot I don't care! Lol, jokes :P

And the summary! Yay! Thank you SO SO much! Lol, I'm HORRIBLE at summarys, but THANK you! Lol. :D

-Lexxx

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 03/01/09 0:17
Chapter: Once Upon A Time

The summary immediately caught my eye and I loved reading the prologue. This sounds like a really interesting fic idea and I can't wait to see where you take it. I especially love the last line with "left alive without living." Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you :) I think that was my favourite line too, so I'm glad you liked it.

Wow, you liked the summary? That's amazing, I'm no god at them, and this one was all my own work. Lol. Thank you so much for all you said :)

-Lexxx

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