Reviews For Mud In His Eyes
Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 08/29/10 2:31
Chapter: Mud In His Eyes

Nice story :). Very dark and a little confusing but really nicely written. I liked the repetition of the opening at the end... it gave your fic a circular feel to it. It seems you like mental problems/disorders :P (I've read Seeding as well), but you wrote it really effectively which is pretty hard, often people mess that kind of thing up I find. Good job!

Author's Response: (Gah, I responded to this once but it didn't post it.) Thanks for reading! To be honest, the "circular" ending hadn't even occurred to me until I was approaching the ending; I don't normally outline my one-shots (Seedling was the exact same). All that I'd known about this one when I started it was that Harry had "a hole in his stomach" and it was the Final Battle. So it's nice to know that it still came together to make a decent story. :) And yes, I do enjoy psychological stories! Thanks again!

Reviewer: azngurlwidhighlights
Date: 04/02/09 23:57
Chapter: Mud In His Eyes

OMG!!! that waz awesome! i loved your perspective of the fight and the emotion that harry is feeling while all this happens around him! you're awesome!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm happy you liked it :)

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