Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/06/12 6:12
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

This is exactly how I feel! Great job. Almost made me cry at the end though, I guess I'm just a sucker for Lily/James. They are probably my favourite couple! Anyway, a job well done. I liked the humour, fluff and angst that all fit in together.

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 01/02/11 6:23
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

This story has actually been on my favorites for a long time, and I just came back and reread it and couldn't believe that I didn't leave a review for such a wonderful piece. You are once of my favorite Lily/James authors; I feel like you really "get" Lily and James, if you know what I mean - their characters as well as their relationship. In each section of the story their voices are so clear, well-defined, and realistic. I especially loved this line from Lily - "I didn't give in to him. I fell in love with him." You did a great job of contradicting the usual "Lily hates James, James has a complete personality change and Lily immediately falls in love with him" story line and instead showing that both of them have grown and changed in their own way. The ending was very poignant and affecting. While I was reading it I almost wished that it had ended after Lily's line about a happy ending, as that is so poignant in itself, but I realize that might seem rather abrupt and I did like the poetry that you included at the end. Anyways, I've just about written an essay here so I probably need to wrap it up - I'll finish by saying, once again, that this is a lovely one-shot and I'm really glad that I re-discovered it. :) ~Vivian

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate all your lovely comments :) I haven't written much what with school and everything, but hopefully I'll have more time in the next few weeks!

Reviewer: deadly_muggle
Date: 10/17/10 4:57
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

Wow, this is really beautiful!

Thanks for an awesome read!!

Reviewer: JWalnut
Date: 11/10/09 13:09
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

Beautifully done! As much as I love the story of James & Lily, the curse that comes with this adoration is the tremendous amount of 'clicheness' that surrounds them. You have brought a realistic and heartfelt perspective on their love, that has left me both relieved and immensely satisfied. Thank you for writing this, and please, DON"T STOP! =D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Lunar_Essence
Date: 06/12/09 23:40
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

Very well written. The end made me tear up. I've loved all your fics so far. Great job =]

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad the emotion connected with you.

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 03/07/09 16:40
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

Wow, I have nothing to say to this except that it was so well written or whatever that I felt like crying at the end. *adds to favorites*

Reviewer: lizziemb
Date: 02/25/09 18:23
Chapter: Uncertainty Defined Those Moments

Gorgeous story. Really shows how people can grow and change. Loved the ending - made me feel a bit weepy.

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