Reviews For A Dream Come True
Reviewer: harry potter lovee
Date: 12/12/10 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

very cute :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 09/07/09 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

Afifa, first off, congratulations on becoming Badger of the Month, September edition!

Second, wow! I loved the fic. The dream was beautiful and you used great description. I could almost hear the pitter patter of rain, smell the moisture around me, and feel wet drops run down my arms. That's a very cute way to have Lily and James get together. I liked the way that Lily didn't get the full version of the dream at once because of being woken up. It reminds me of how, just when I get to the best part of my dream,I wake up and never know the ending.

Great job!
~Lexi~

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, Lexi, for the compliments. :D I'm glad you liked reading the one shot. :)

- Afifa

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 09/07/09 12:22
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

"Ahh, you see, I can be a nice sensitive bloke at times. I wasn't nicking her bag, as you so accurately guessed and no ... I wasn't about to gill it with newts eyes or any of that stuff that padfoot was thinking."

"Oy! Prongs. Leave me out of this. I didn't dare suggest such a thing. Nice snog you got there from the lovely Lily. Shame she hadn't brushed her hair or anything, but , well, I don't suppose you were bothered by that.

"Bothered, course not. It's not every day that the girl you've been pining for launches herself at you in such an unexpected way and then snogs the life out of you ... and all this before breakfast."

"Or beakfast, as Afifa wrote which might be something completely different."

"Moony, you are such a kill-joy. Leave the nitpicks back in the trunk where they belong."

"All right, Padfoot, keep your long hair on. I was just pointing out ..."

"Well don't. It was a wonderful story, and the way Afifa wrote about my dream was beautiful. I'd wuite forgotten that. Ahh, I used to wonder who my handsome prince was."

"Didn't you honestly know it was me?"

"Hmm, well for a long time I rather hoped it was David Cassidy... but ... I suppose you'll do, Potter."

Guys, will you get out of here, and take that cheese-eating traitor with you. Afifa, my dear, that was a great story. I LOVE that Lily took control and kissed him, and James was very IC - totally surprised by her sudden volte-face. Loved it! Technically, the description in the dream was great. I really felt as if I were in a magical world. Well Done ~Carole~

Author's Response: Hahaha. XD Have I mentioned to you, Carole, how much I love you? Lol. Well, now I am, ily. :D

You know I had to look up the Cassidy guy. >.> He's good looking... maybe. I guess he must have been considered hot in the olden times. What's it, 60 years? lol. You've done your research though. I'm impressed. :D



I'm glad you liked the one shot, hon! :D And thank you for pointing out the typo. And for the comments and the lovely review! :D



- Afifa

Reviewer: HermioneGrangerfan
Date: 08/27/09 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

aww really sweet 8-) i really enjoyed it
adding to my favourite stories
~ kassy
xxxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :D Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: jamesandlilyfan85
Date: 04/14/09 20:16
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

Aww, my favorite pair! Yay. Well done.

Author's Response: Mine, too! :D Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 03/16/09 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

aww thats so sweet!!! I luv it ...
awwww!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D

Reviewer: James_SiriusLOVER1
Date: 03/12/09 21:15
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

AWW It was very cute!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: thepurplesphinx
Date: 03/08/09 23:00
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

I loved it! I really hope you write more Lily/James fics, they're my fave. I'm going to add you to my favorite authors list!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you loved it. =] I'm going to write a lot of J/L since they're my OTP. =D I already have four fics up. Three of them are J/L, and one a chaptered Marauder era fic in which there will be J/L. You can visit my author page to read them if you like.

Aw, I'd be honoured to be on your favourites list.



Thank you for the lovely review! =]

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 02/25/09 23:53
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

Good story, great idea. Just a couple of rough spots where I'm not sure what you meant to say:

"She knew it was no use wishing for something, that she had to move one."

What did she have to move?

“I’m guessing you won’t be coming from breakfast either.”

Shouldn't that be "coming to breakfast"?

Author's Response: Okay, so I tried to remember, I even read the story twice but I can't find the first line you pointed out. :S But I guess it's just a typo and I mean 'on' and not 'one' if this line is included in the one shot.

About the other line, it's another typo. *blushes* It should be 'for'. Thank you for pointing it out, I'll edit it right away.



I'm glad you liked reading the one shot. Thanks for leaving a review! =]

Reviewer: minnabird
Date: 02/25/09 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

This is lovely. I like how the dream plays a part in it, and that in the dream-fairy-tale there are obstacles that her would-be husband had to pass to get her out of the tower and win her love. A nice symbol for Lily's love life, I'm thinking. (Either that or I've been spending too much time in English class).

"Her heart had been saying it since sixth year. Since when she had gotten to know Potter, but had resisted the feeling because she wanted to find out through the dream. This meant it had to be true." - I love these lines. It tells me in a couple short sentences that this isn't sudden at all, that these feelings have been developing for a while, and that she really wants James to be hers forever.

Also, they're well-characterized, which is always a plus.

All in all, a short but very sweet story. =)

Author's Response: Yeah, the dream was a completely random idea actually. I don't even remember why I hit it off with a dream. I wrote this a year back or so. >.> Lol. But I'm glad that it worked out fine and you liked it. =] Thanks for the lovely review, dear. =]

Reviewer: in love with harry
Date: 02/25/09 19:34
Chapter: Chapter 1-- A Dream Come True

that was really good i loved it

Author's Response: Yay! First review! =D I'm glad you loved it. Thanks for the review. =]

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