I have to say, I really love that. The summary instantly drew me in.
I love second person, of course, always have, and you did a great job with it in this. I also like that you kept the girl's identity a secret. I liked basically everything about this. Except that the ending was a little cold. But of course, that's a stylistic thing I have. It was all well-written, original, and lovely. :) I wish there were more. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mia (my second person inspiration!), for the sweet review. I'm so glad you liked this; it was so much fun to write. :)
Oh my goodness that was amazing. It was so sad I cried.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)