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Name: RedChequeredConverse (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 13:14 · For: Scorpius
LOVELY! Yes! A mongoose -- that's so awesome. :) I once had a long conversation with someone about whether the plural of mongoose was mongeese or mongooses . . .but that's a story for another time.

My favorite quotes (and there are a lot):

Scorpius wasn't wearing a shirt and Rose's heart was beating like crazy.


He was so confusing. And fascinating. "What do you want?"

Scorpius kissed her.

So perfect! I'll admit I squeed. *looks around sheepishly*

Rose lowered her hands and got an unobstructed view of Scorpius' chest. "Wow—I mean, sorry . . .

*laughs head off*

Dad!" Rose turned on her heel to beg him to shout at her in private and almost died of embarrassment on the spot. He was wearing plaid boxers! "You're yelling at us? At least we have clothes on!"

"Boxers are clothes." Her dad crossed his arms.

*begins to gasp for air* So bloody brilliant. And so Ron.

"My life wasn't paradise anyway."

The rest of these I pointed out because they were funny. This one is just so perfectly glorious . . .wow. Just wow.

Poor Roxanne. :( I'm kinda glad George and Angelina are splitting up, though. From a writer's POV, it adds more drama. :) From a reader's POV, at least a Fred/Angelina shipper's POV, it is sweet revenge. *cackles evily* Just kidding. I'm sad for George, too. :(

As always, UPDATE! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for including your favorite quotes! It's so nice to see what you liked!

Did you say mongooses? That's the correct form, funny as it looks.

My George/Alicia post epilogue story won a Quicksilver Quill, (this is only the second review I've mentioned that in, heh, it's harder to slip into RL conversation) so I'm sad yet happy for George to be free to find someone who loves him for the right reasons, with all her heart. And you can probably guess who that'll be, ;).

Name: KPotter7 (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 11:53 · For: Patronus
It was great!! Sporious seems so good looking. Ha and I love the stuff about there outfits. It addicting I can't wait for moreee!!!!

Author's Response: No couple (of sense and taste, heh) wants to look matchy-matchy, but coordinating is nice. Not that Scorpius would admit it. He might not even have noticed the dress for the legs, lol.

Name: Sagitta (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 9:21 · For: Patronus
wow! write more OR I might die of heartbreak. seriouslySeriousley this is the best story ever please tell me you write really fast !!!

Author's Response: I write really fast. Siriusly. ^_~

Name: Black-Sand (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 9:02 · For: Patronus

I LOVE YOU!!!! LOL, Sorry, I've never been a fan of the George/Angelina relationship. If you were a Badger, you'd know, George is my fav character and I just don't want him with Angelina. Angelina and Fred, fine, but not George. Your story just got ten times better. Which I thought was impossible because I really like your story. I've been reading it since it came out but I've never had the time to review till now. And I HAD to review and tell you. I have the biggest smile on my face at your last part.

Greta job before this chapter, magnificent job now.

...xXxLove SandyxXx...

Author's Response: My George/Alicia post DH set For Bitter or for Worse won the 2008 Quicksilver Quill for best Dark/Angsty story, but even if I wasn't biased, :D, I'd agree with you! Thank you, Sandy, for putting a huge smile on my face with your review. I'll probably write a George pov one shot about it sometime, so I hope that will make you even happier!

Name: ringobeatlesfan4 (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 8:58 · For: Patronus
Wow. Poor Roxanne! I loved this chapter, and i love the entire story. Rose/Scorpius is my new official OTP, thanks to this. It was really well written, and I really need to remember to add it to my favorites... I can't believe I haven't done it yet! Anyway, great job, please update soon, and all of that! {BeccA}

Author's Response: I'm sad for Roxanne and happy for me. :D Thank you so much for saying that, BeccA!

Name: Sagitta (Signed) · Date: 04/14/09 2:52 · For: Promises
Hey, I love this chapter because you captured Ron really well! PLEASE write your upload the next xhapter I've been checking everyday!!! PLEASE!!!


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Name: Sagitta (Signed) · Date: 04/13/09 20:21 · For: Scorpius
Hey, dude. WOW! I really like this story and it's becoming more addictive. I've been checking for an update everyday I even checked on Easter!!! Please I really can't wait to find out what is Malfoy's patronus.

P.S NEVER stop writing (it would kill me)

Author's Response:

Name: juli_dances (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 20:59 · For: Promises
I loved this chapter! And I must admit, I was singing wave, wave, wave your wand and it's stuck in my head now. haha. I'm excited to see Scorpius' Patronus and I was very pleased with his reception from the Weasleys. Lucy is so cute! I look forward to the next chapter, as always.

Author's Response:

Yay for you singing! The Patronus will send Rose running downstairs, and Lucy's even cuter in the next chapter (it involves a treehouse and a toad, I can say no more, lol)


Name: Gin_Drinka (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 20:23 · For: Promises
Wow, this is actually getting better. :) Pretty hefty accomplishment there.

Well, all I can sya is that I'm dying for more.

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! I dying to give it to you. ;)

Name: Ehatsley74 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 18:25 · For: Scorpius
Has anyone told you that this story is addicting?
I'm very impressed. I really love the way Draco is obsessive about his son's safety. It sort of adds depth to the character we see in canon.

Brilliant story, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Reviews are addicting, too, so I have to make sure I get my fix regularly, LOL. Thank you for liking that about Draco. I've written a Draco pov one shot that goes along with the story and shows his thoughts that I think you'll like. :)


Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 12:40 · For: Promises
I like this chapter... wonder wat shape is scorpius's patronus... haha update soon... cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I can't wait for your reaction! :D

Name: Aradion (Signed) · Date: 04/07/09 12:16 · For: Promises
Well, what can I say...Honestly, what can I say? I thought this fic had potential just a couple of weeks ago but I guess I was wrong... Because after reading this chapter, I came to realise that it is "bloody brilliant!"(as Ron would so accurately suggest). By the way:"She's not your Juliet, Romeo." I loved this line to bits! This story is so cleverly written...and the interaction between Scorpius and Rose is thrilling! Keep up the good work and NEVER EVER give up on this fic!!!

Author's Response:

You had me worried with the first few sentences, lol. It felt like I was on a game show and the host was making the 'aw, sorry, you lost' face...only to perk up and say you won! :D I could imagine Hermione telling Ron, "Don't make situation something out of Romeo and Juliet" and him taking that and using it against Scorpius.

Thank you so much, and I promise not to. I'm currently the most prolific author on the site (last time I checked, anyway, heh) and not one of my stories is incomplete (and one had 52 chapters)!

Name: randomwordplay (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 20:57 · For: Promises
You're doing a great job of building suspense, while revealing little details about the characters at the same time. I'm really enjoying this story :)

Author's Response: Thank you! In real life we seldom know everything there is to know about a person the first time we meet them (thankfully, heh) so I want you to get to know characters more over time because I want them to be "real" too!

Name: half_bloodprincess15 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 19:23 · For: Promises
I bet his patronus is a totally unexpected sweet creature. I'm addicted don't stop writing!!!!

Author's Response: I won't, and I can tell you that when Rose sees his Patronus, she says OMG, lol.

Name: lostinside1 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 17:21 · For: Family
Verisimilitude means reality.... I don't understand why you called the potion that.

Author's Response: Verismilitude is the quality of appearing to be true or real. That's why I called the potion that, because it's a truth potion, although not as strong as Veritaserum.

Name: RedChequeredConverse (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 13:49 · For: Promises
YES! I *heart* fast updates, which you seem to be the queen of! *huggles*

Amazing chappie, as usual. I really want to know what Scorpius' Patronus is . . .*twiddles thumbs impatiently*

“Elitists eat pizza?”

Hehe! I'm going to have to use that. :)

“You’re telling us Draco Malfoy makes pizza?”

“He supervises.”

ROFL! That is so funny.

One thing, and it's minor to the extreme -- Ron? Wine? I admit I did a double-take; he doesn't seem to be the wine-drinking type. *scratches chin*

Anyway -- great chapter! I love you! Update soon!

Author's Response:

Ron's a grown man married to a woman of sophisticated taste. Yes, he drinks wine...and also beer, when he's at a Quidditch match or in a pub with his mates. :D

I couldn't see Draco making pizza, but supervising, very him, heh.

There are a couple of other authors who seem to update faster, so I can only claim Princess status, LOL.

Name: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 18:52 · For: Anticipation
Okay, I felt like obligated to leave a review! I've never ever been into Next Generation fan-fics; especially Rose/Scorpius ones. But (please excuse how fan-girl I am here) OMGGG I love it :D

Author's Response:

Don't feel obligated, that's like your mum making you eat your veg, lol, but if you're inspired, that's luv-er-ly. I've never written a next gen fic before, so we're even. ;) Thank you so much!

Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 2:53 · For: Family
i love it!! update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping soon = in the next few days! :)

Name: RedChequeredConverse (Signed) · Date: 04/01/09 21:18 · For: Scorpius
Please pardon my fangirlyness for a moment, while I say:


*cough* Anyway -- it was. Really. And now I'm excited for the next chapter . . .more then usual . . .please update soon, lest I lose what little sanity I've managed to old on to. ;-)

Author's Response: Fangirlyness is a good thing! The next chapter is a lot of fun, but I have to warn you, for sanity's sake, lol, that if you thought THIS chapter had a cliffie....

Name: Holly218 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/09 20:45 · For: Family
Sigh, it just keeps getting better. You make me feel inadequate (sp?).

Author's Response: Your spelling is great and I'm sure your writing is just as fab, so no Debbie Downerism, por favor!

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