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Name: grangergal101 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 21:01 · For: Sink
I am new to mugglenet and this is only the second fanfiction i have read but i find it absoloutely great and found myself reading it even though i'm meant to be studying for exams, i wait in anticipation for the next chapter.

One thing though, was it just me or did kreacher seem more like his old self than how he is in the 7th book after the locket was given to him

PS the authors notes are fantastic

Author's Response:

You made my day liking the author notes! Thank you, and I'm glad you found Mugglenet (and not totally for selfish reasons). You obviously needed a break from studying and after reading I'm sure you went right back to it and will ace every exam!

Kreacher is happy with Harry, I don't doubt that, but he has a past and issues he'll never really get over.

Name: Hedwig_is_my_owl (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 19:08 · For: Sink
Loved the blue/green eyes reference :) Interested to see what will happen now that Scorpius has arrive in the Potter household...and that a "black" family member is now in Grimmauld Place....I figured that Kreacher wasn't affected because house-elves have powerful magic of their own (as Dobby has shown us many times over).....*anxiously waits for the next chappie*

Author's Response: Thank you for liking my little poke at Dan. I bet there are kids who see the films then read the books and go "his eyes are green?" :D Winky got hit by a body bind curse once, but she was younger than Kreacher and didn't graduate from the Mrs. Black school of tough love, lol.

Name: SimpleMinds (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 15:51 · For: Sink
Argeles sur Mer! You've been there i guess? I went there 3 years ago! ;)

Anyway, absolutely love this story, which is strange for me to like a next-gen fic! Most of all though, i like how you haven't made Rose, Lily et al clones of their parents which is what most fanfic writers seem to do! Keep up the good work! ;)

Author's Response:

*hums It's a Small World* Wow, what a coincidence! No, I've never been there, just googled best beaches in Europe and picked the one that sounded like wizards would like it! :D

Thank you for liking Rose and Scorpius! Children do share traits with parents, but you're right, they aren't clones and shouldn't be characterized that way. Scorpius has been raised in a very different time and way than Draco was.

Name: Rislans88 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 15:35 · For: Sink
nice update :) can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it's hard to wait, even when it can't be helped, and I appreciate the encouraging turn of phrase. :)

Name: multicolour_biro (Signed) · Date: 06/08/09 11:33 · For: Sink
I'm first to review! I feel a bit bad about never reviewing your stories so i'm telling you now that i love this story. Please, after this story continue writing next generation, maybe albus? Some rose/scorpius storys annoy of with the cliche and rubbish characterisation. But you blow them away. I've fallen in love with your funny and clever scorpius and the cute over protective draco. My friends think i'm crazy because i think draco and snape are hot. Thank you for updating so quickly, your the only one in my favorites who does so. I like it how scorp is afraid of harry's house. And rose using his soap. And your author notes are always interesting.

Author's Response: Tell your friends that there are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in their philosophy, heh, and they're missing out, not appreciating Slytherin men! I'm happy you like my characterizations and thank you so much for reviewing! That's a dream come true of writers, when lurkers come out of the shadows to say they're enjoying a story. Hopefully, stepping into the light didn't burn, you didn't burst into flames, and you feel even half as sparkly writing the review as I did reading it, :D, so you'll make my day again sometime! ;)

Name: SeVeRuS LoVeR (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 16:34 · For: Scorpius
omg i absolutely love this story! i googled hp fanfic and this story popped up and i've been hooked ever since. i registered for an account on mugglenet just so that i could review your story and tell you how great of a writer you are. after i read your story i became hooked on the rose/scorpius ship so i read i think almost all the r/s ship stories on mugglenet and yours is definitely by far the best. i check at least twice a day for updated chapters and get overjoyed when i see a new one. you really know how to flesh out your characters and even your secondary characters. i love your version of rose and scorpius keep up the good work.


Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful compliments and for loving the story and liking secondary characters! Rose and Scorpius are such a dynamic pair, their personalities complement each other and make writing a lot of fun.

If you're ever in need of a story to read while you wait for an update to post, I have a Severus/OC fic called More Than a Feeling that won the Best Marauder Era Story Quicksilver Quill award in 2007 you might enjoy...taking a wild guess from your name that you love Severus. ^_~

Name: hestiajones (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 4:47 · For: Stories
I think this is the best take on lily/scorpius i have ever read. you handled the storyline quite well!when are you posting the next chapter?

Author's Response: Thank you! Their characters are really "alive" to me, so I'm having the best time writing from their povs. I'm not quite sure when the next chapter will post, but it's closing in on two weeks, so hopefully any day! :)

Name: fairylights1006 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 12:04 · For: Stories
I am loving this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. And I think you're doing an amazing job with the characters!

Author's Response:

Double reviews don't happen often. It might get deleted, but before it does I'll take the opportunity to say thank you again! :)

Name: fairylights1006 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 12:04 · For: Stories
I am loving this story. I can't wait to see where it goes. And I think you're doing an amazing job with the characters!

Author's Response: Thank you! The first chapter gives clues to where it's going, and when Scorpius gets there, I hope it'll be very satisfying! :)

Name: Hedwig_is_my_owl (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 14:57 · For: Stories
Okay...I am just reading your stories; I sat here and read all 16 chapters, and I am in total *love* with your writing. I love Ron's over-protectiveness countered by Hermione's slightly more laid-back self...Having Scorpius thrown into the huge Weasley/Potter clan had me laughing while feeling *slightly* bad for him. Your development of the characters is amazing, and I look forward to the next chapter......

Author's Response: Thank you so much for loving the story! Hermione went from being a stickler for rules to breaking them when it was the right thing to do, so I think she'd be the more "understanding" parent, even if she shares too much at times. :D I feel a bit sorry for Scorpius too...not enough to keep from throwing him into situations and making him deal with them... ;)

Name: SiriuslyDementedAzkaban1992 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/09 12:49 · For: Scorpius
*gasps*pretty...haha it's very good

Author's Response: Thank you! I like your name. Heart Sirius. :)

Name: Rislans88 (Signed) · Date: 05/31/09 13:29 · For: Stories
fantastic update!!

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! :)

Name: RTTLupin (Signed) · Date: 05/28/09 23:18 · For: Stories
Yet another fantastic chapter I am really enjoying this story. I get all excited when see a new chapter posted. I am intrigued by the ‘version’ of his parents that you are creating and would love to see them interact with the Weasley and Potter families some. Maybe that is coming in the future. :D

Great Job! Can’t wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Weasleys VS Malfoys, kinda like Alien VS Predator except there's no bad side and nobody dies, LOL. That would be fun. Thanks for suggesting that, Sara!

Name: sufferance (Signed) · Date: 05/28/09 18:27 · For: Stories
I've really enjoyed how you depict Scorpius. I think it's spot-on for him, what with having a conflicting pureblood/tolerance mindset. He's also definitely showing a strength of will his father never had, which is very plausible as well.

I've always been a sucker for romances, and this just keeps getting better. :)

Author's Response: Yay for you being a sucker for romance! I agree about Scorpius. He's had a very different upbringing than Draco had, taught tolerance by his mother and yet he's been conditioned by Lucius to dislike Harry Potter every bit as much as Draco was.

Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 05/28/09 14:40 · For: Stories
love it!!!!! another great chapter... :P.. i like the part abt where Hermione spills about her love life ...haha was so funny!!! by the way, whose sofa? harry's??

update sooon.... cant wait 2 read d next chapter!!!

Author's Response: It's a mystery about the sofa, :D, but my guess is Christmas at the Burrow, Rose was asleep in the middle of their bed upstairs, so Hermione and Ron came down to the lounge for a kiss and cuddle. ^_~

Name: BookWormVicky (Signed) · Date: 05/26/09 10:27 · For: Chat
Her toes, so funny and the comment about the Gyriffindor thing being catching was ace. Very randomly, I know it wasn't in this chap, but the hufflegryff thing was really good as weel. What would Slytherin-Gryffindor be? Slythergryff? Gryfflyther? Slytherdor? Gryfferin? The first and last are best I think, I hope to see that come up later, that would be hilarious!!

Really funny that his hand keeps stinging and I did think at the time that was a bit of a stupid thing to agree to. Will that ever stop, I really hope so, LOL.

Oh no, the mention that his grandfather will never find out, wince, hate to think of what's going to happen.

Loving all the Twilight mentions in the AN's, even if you haven't read them. Accio e-Edward, i could do with one of those shirts!

Love that he overthinks and then when he's with her, can't think of a better way to phrase that, he forgets it all. Okay, that sounded corny, but it's brilliant!!

Glad there is only one Chat, not many because that gives them more space to talk rather than it getting all crammed in. It's alot better this way.

Just generally loving it, limerick was so funny!! Can't wait for chap 16!!

Author's Response:

SlythGryff, SlytherGryff, any way you pronounce it, won't be on Scorpius' mind. Funny how he can make fun of Albus and Merry but when it comes to Rose, it's serious, heh.

If he hadn't agreed to the handshake, he wouldn't have been allowed to stay, so Scorpius made the right choice and will live with the pain, :D.

I hope you won't have to wait much longer (counts days since last chap published) and thank you for the lovely compliments and for reading!

Name: BookWormVicky (Signed) · Date: 05/26/09 10:14 · For: Anticipation
YAY!! They kissed, adore it!! (love is too weak a word)
Love that she's his first girlfriend and when Lily came in, LOL I laughed so hard.
Really brilliant relationship dynamic between the two, you have a great skill for that. Also love the whole 'list making' thing, a list of the 'getting to know you' stuff, funny!
Really brilliant, can't wait for chap 16!! (don't ask why I review this chap, not 15 because I don't know, I'll probably review 15 as well.)
Excellent, I adore it!!!

Author's Response:

Feel free to review anytime, anywhere, any chapter! :D

Having a girlfriend always seemed more trouble that it was worth, but now Scorpius has a girl who's worth any amount of trouble! ^_~

Name: inluvwid_pdft (Signed) · Date: 05/25/09 18:40 · For: Scorpius
Great! Thanks...
I can't wait to st started on it. Although it'll have to wait until school gets out for summer...

Author's Response: You're giving me another reason to look forward to summer. :)

Name: dee-hearts-sirius (Signed) · Date: 05/25/09 16:17 · For: Chat
I have never really had any interest in next gen fics, but you have changed that!!! This is the first I've ever read and I just love it! Thanks for opening up a whole new catogory for me!

Author's Response: I heart Sirius too (and I have a Sirius Marauder Era romance Semi Charmed Life I think you'd like) and I'm so glad you gave a next gen fic a chance. Thank you!

Name: witch1561 (Signed) · Date: 05/22/09 15:48 · For: Chat
I don't have time to write a long review, but I would just like to say I have been reading and really enjoying this. The great advantage of next generation stories is that the characters have much more opportunity to do different things, and all of those described here fit very well with what we know about them. Scorpius and Rose in particular I think are really well written, but also Albus and Lily I've enjoyed reading about and I can't wait to see the visit to the Potter house.

Where did you get the idea for the Wizard's Handshake? It makes the story really interesting... :)

Author's Response:

You pack a lot of wonderful things into a "short" review! :D Thank you for liking the secondary characters as well as the leads. That made my day.

Back before HBP I wrote a Draco/Ginny story in which Draco gives Arthur a Wizard's Handshake. I needed a way to show good intentions/build trust without being as drastic a consequence as an Unbreakable Vow. Since people have done business deals on a handshake, why not make it turn the phrase "my word is my bond" literal? ^_^

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