Reviews For Our Little Secret
Reviewer: hufflepuffatheart
Date: 08/21/12 7:21
Chapter: Burrow

Hahahahahahhahahahaha "Snog me!"

Author's Response: Thank you for laughing with me at that. :D

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 08/17/12 4:50
Chapter: Decisions

Ohh... Even rereading is fantastic! :P Great job as always.
There is just something about the way you write that I absolutely love- I just can't put my finger on it! :D
Keep up the good work! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think notifications went wonky for a time because I never saw this, and I'm glad I went and looked to see if I had any unanswered reviews. :)

Reviewer: Luna432
Date: 05/31/12 1:55
Chapter: Questions

hahahahaha Miley Siren! that's great! just great! :) I agree that she can't sing... :)

Author's Response: Hello again! I think she can sing . . . but I wish she wouldn't. :P

Reviewer: kneazle94
Date: 04/16/12 0:42
Chapter: Patronus

I believe in Nargles is a great song ^_^
loving this story... I love scorpius/weasley ships

Author's Response: You have exceptional taste in music and ships. :D I'm thrilled you're reading my story. Thanks!

Reviewer: silverdoe98
Date: 03/04/12 23:05
Chapter: Decisions

you are an amazing author.....i think i read this story about three times, and i will not tire of it. amazing.

Author's Response: I didn't receive an alert when you reviewed, I just checked today on a whim, and I'm so glad I did. I've been writing original fiction, which means no reviewer feedback to let me know if I'm doing a good job or not. Your encouragement came at a great time. Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: tsukue67
Date: 01/16/12 6:38
Chapter: Decisions

One of my favorite things about your work is the way you incorporate things from so many sources into a story that is still original. The Pride and Prejudice references are every bit as marvelous as all the Princess Bride references from A Tale of Two Matchmakers. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: That's one of the perks of fan fiction, being able to incorporate references you can't use in original writing. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: tsukue67
Date: 01/16/12 3:30
Chapter: Anticipation

Awww! I like Scorpius :) He's not like your portrayal of Draco in A Tale of Two Matchmakers, but that just makes him even better as a character. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. I didn't want Scorpius and Rose to be Draco and Hermione incarnations. They deserve to be their own people. :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/16/11 23:16
Chapter: Decisions

Excellent story! You write beautifully.

Author's Response: You encourage beautifully. Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/16/11 20:18
Chapter: Anticipation

He's never had a girlfriend? Wow. Coolness, though. Great chapter!

Author's Response: He's dated girls, but none of them became girlfriends. Malfoy standards and all that. heh

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/16/11 20:08
Chapter: Conflict

Well, well, well, interesting chapter. I think it's kind of funny. Is this really how they end up falling in love?

Author's Response: It's the first domino toppling. You can't see the pattern that's forming yet, but I hope you're looking forward to it. :D

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/16/11 19:49
Chapter: Questions

I love your little story references! This is a really good fanfic so far!

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a perk of fan fiction. :)

Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 09/05/11 8:24
Chapter: Decisions

It's honestly sweet.

Author's Response: That is a wonderful compliment. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: kritchen
Date: 07/09/11 13:23
Chapter: Promises

I knew that first line was familiar. I loved The Illusionist! Rose and Scorpius would definitely be able to pull of so daring a caper. In fact, it seems they already are. I just love your characterization of them. This is my first next generation that I've read and your portrayal of Ron is exactly how I'd imagine him reacting. Wonderful story!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Ron has matured, and he reacts like a dad, but there's still a bit of the boy left who's suspicious of all Slytherins (especially Malfoys!), and it'll take awhile before he trusts Scorpius with his daughter. :D

Reviewer: kritchen
Date: 07/09/11 12:38
Chapter: Conflict

This is the first chapter of this I've decided to review but it is definitely worth it. I've always had a thing for those slightly opposing couples. You've written Rose and Scorpius wonderfully in that aspect. They are their own characters and while they are different from each other, I believe they compliment each other well. This was not the favor I saw coming at all. It's a wonderful cliffhanger. :)

Author's Response: When a story's complete there's no reason you can't read straight through, so I'm happy you stopped to tell me you like the characterization and the cliffhanger. Thank you!

Reviewer: starcrab
Date: 06/11/11 1:54
Chapter: Stories

yay! ending of a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Is your pen name your astrological sign?

Reviewer: starcrab
Date: 06/10/11 23:54
Chapter: Burrow

haha loved ''love without measure" bit great job

Author's Response: Thank you! Luna is so much fun to write, I think I'm going to have to give her a cameo in the sequel's epilogue. :D

Reviewer: ATL Lover
Date: 05/31/11 22:32
Chapter: Decisions

wait what??? no you cant end it like that, do they find out that he blasted the wall??? does his grandfather?? other then that AMAZING storie!!!!! Rose and Scorius so cute together! cant wait for the next chapter of "our little secret:lost" :D

Author's Response: I had to do it, but thanks for wanting the story to be longer, and double thanks for reading the sequel! The next chapter just posted. ;)

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 02/21/11 21:27
Chapter: Stories

Harry's sofa

Author's Response: Harry had a party, they stayed over? It's a possibility!

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 02/21/11 17:50
Chapter: Rose

love it love it love it!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :) ^_^ (:

Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 01/27/11 21:30
Chapter: Stories

I loved this chapter!! I was cracking up from that little "talks" they had with Rose

Mum drew in a breath and exhaled slowly. "Sweetheart, I remember what it was like to be a teenager."

Rose tried not to cringe. Oh, Merlin, please don't share. PLEASE do not share!

"The intensity of certain . . . feelings . . . ."

I do NOT want to hear this.


“You gave your word, and I know you don’t intend to break it. This is for my peace of mind, because I remember what it’s like to be young—”

“Thanks, Dad,” Rose cut in before he got warmed up. Mum’s “personal example” was disturbing enough. Any more parental sharing would give her nightmares.

Ahhhh I love this story and dont plan to stop reading until its done!

Author's Response: Parents "sharing" is one of those hilarious to read about, not so funny when it's YOUR parents, sort of thing, hehheh. I love that you're reading, so thank you!

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