Reviewer: Goddess Athena
Date: 03/06/10 18:32
Chapter: Abligurition

OMG what happens??? PLEASE keep writing!!!

Reviewer: Goddess Athena
Date: 03/06/10 18:30
Chapter: Abligurition

OMG what happens??? PLEASE keep writing!!!

Reviewer: miss ginny1
Date: 12/26/09 19:24
Chapter: Abligurition

Wow, I really like the story, but the end kinda confuses me (but I guess that's what a person would call a cliff hanger). Can you explain? By the way, I like the part about the ceilings being sacred.

Reviewer: mugglemallory07
Date: 07/28/09 21:46
Chapter: Abligurition

this was really good! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Storytellerdoll
Date: 07/13/09 14:47
Chapter: Abligurition

AAAAAAHHHHH! What happens next? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! lol Great story so far! Keep going! Please!

Reviewer: MadEyeMaddy
Date: 02/15/09 20:24
Chapter: Abligurition

I usually hate Lily/James fics but the title caught my eye.
Nice job update soon (:

Reviewer: hpheart
Date: 02/13/09 11:06
Chapter: Abligurition

This story caught my eye simply because of the title...I love that word! I recently used it in an essay...I didn't think many people knew it!

A good story anyway.

Reviewer: yoursammy
Date: 02/13/09 0:31
Chapter: Abligurition

good.....but the ending cd hv been better...

Reviewer: bk64
Date: 02/12/09 22:04
Chapter: Abligurition

wow that was really funny...very james. while the end was confusing, i think that it was the right amount of confusing because james was confused himself (if that makes any sense at all!!!)

keep it up, update soon!

Author's Response: What?!?! Come on, guys! Everybody else got it :P He's just been knocked unconcious and he's got weirder than usual thoughts running through his mind :) It will be explained next chapter thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/12/09 21:38
Chapter: Abligurition

I kind of agree that the ending was confusing. I definitely missed something around the part about the ceiling. BUT, other than that, I enjoyed this. It was witty, light-hearted, and yet still pretty in-character for a first chapter.

I'm looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/12/09 19:33
Chapter: Abligurition

Sounds promising

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 02/12/09 17:50
Chapter: Abligurition

That last part was really confusing... I hope it will be cleared up in the next chapter!

Reviewer: AmayaBlack
Date: 02/12/09 17:47
Chapter: Abligurition

that was funny, i like it very much. What happened to James?

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