Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 01/29/10 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him

OH MY GODRIC!!! How could you kill Demetri? This is horrible, I wanna cry. Poor Genevieve.
Sorry I didn't comment last time, I didn't get a chance too.

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 01/27/10 22:38
Chapter: Chapter 22: Healing Body and Wounded Soul

Wow, for once Teddy gets something very right and Harry brushes him off D: and we already knew Nathaniel wants to kill Demetri, but thanks to Yaxley for confirming it. Ugh but Demetri can't die!! What about Genevieve?? Without Demetri... what's there left for her? ):

Btw, Ivette was a shocker there. That was completely alien to the personality we know. She must really be angry, though I'd be, too. Kill the disgraciatto!!! Lol

Ah, and thank you, Teddy, for starting to believe that Demetri loves Viev rotfl xD

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Haha, yes, Harry did brush Teddy off, but as I said before, there is a reason. There is also a reason for Ivette's behavior; she's been holding onto this anger for a while, and who wouldn't? Especially when her husband was nearly killed. As for Demetri, well, like you said, Nathaniel has been wanting to kill him off, and Yaxley was only a confirmation of what Demetri had been thinking for a while. As for Teddy, he doesn't fully believe it, but he's a little more convinced than before. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/24/10 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 22: Healing Body and Wounded Soul

I wish Harry would listen to Teddy and get more security for Demetri. I have a horrible feeling something bad is going to happen to him. I loved this line, “Men, I think our wives have just taken dominance. Honestly, making all of us take our children to school.”. Loved that. I wish Demetri had cursed Yaxley. The things he was saying about Genevieve made me angry. I'm looking forward to reading more. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Crystal! There's actually a reason Harry isn't going to listen to Teddy on this one. Besides, Demetri said that it would only cause worse problems and make Nathaniel more convinced of his disloyalty, something Demetri can't afford at any costs. Yes, I quite liked having the men take their kids to school; they're adorable. Oh, Demetri was ready to do worse than just kill Yaxley, but he was in front of many Aurors and the Head of the Auror Department... not much he can do there. Thank you again for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 01/19/10 13:46
Chapter: Chapter 20: Attack at the Stadium

D: Sam!!
Ok, ok... must keep reading. Agh, Teddy and his assumptions lol!

Author's Response: Lol, yes, poor Sam. And Teddy will continue with his assumptions for some time. :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/16/10 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 21: I'm Still Glad I Stayed

I KNEW Demetri didn't do that on purpose to Sam. And YAY for Freya! Poor Genevieve :(. It's like she's totally helpless...and she seems like the kinda girl who doesn't like being helpless, at all.

Loving the chapter, incase you can't tell :P. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Lol, thank you, MIssTiquelle. Yes, Genevieve is having a very, very hard time with this. She likes being in control and this contract is definitely taking a toll on her. Demetri did not like having to do that to Sam, but it was necessary to save his life. Thank you again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/16/10 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 21: I'm Still Glad I Stayed

Thank goodness Freya arrived when she did. I hope Demetri isn't killed. The ending was beautiful. I enjoyed reading this as I always do. Nicely done, mzap. Sorry for the short review. Longer one next time, I promise. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Crystal! Yes, it was good that Freya arrived in time and thank you about the ending. I loved that part too. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 01/15/10 13:28
Chapter: Chapter 21: I'm Still Glad I Stayed

i knew he was in the attack at the quidditch game, not that i'm happy about that but still. i'm so glad that freya showed up before nathaniel could do anything really damaging. i loved how freya is as mad about this mess as genevieve is, i didn't think she'd be on the same side honestly. i loved the ending, and i can't wait for the next chapter. thanks for another great chapter mzap!

Author's Response: Thank you, Alice! (and if you were curious, I did recognize your username when I saw it and I totally remember you :) ) What Demetri did was not good, but he'd rather Sam have had a chance at living than none at all. Freya is a bit on the fence about some things; she was raised to conform to certain ideals, but this form of blackmail is not something she agrees with. However, she still has a hard time with Muggles and Muggle-borns; if Genevieve had been of lesser blood, I don't think Freya would have liked her as much. Thank you for reading and reviewing this! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 01/11/10 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 20: Attack at the Stadium

great new chapter. i was worried there for a while about sam, but i'm happy that he's alright. i can't wait to find out if demetri was involved in the attack, and what's going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the reply, Alice! As I keep saying, you'll find out soon enough. :P Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/11/10 10:57
Chapter: Chapter 20: Attack at the Stadium

Oh thank goodness Sam is going to be all right. I fear that this is only the beginning of more deaths and pain. I don't believe for a minute that Demetri had anything to do with what happened at the Quidditch Stadium. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Yes, Sam will be okay. :) You'll find out more about the attack in the next chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/08/10 13:06
Chapter: Chapter 20: Attack at the Stadium

Ok, you know how much I LOVE Sam and how scared I was that he was going to die OMG but he's not thank God...
Demetri did that? At least he didn't kill Sam, but really? I was starting to like Demetri, not anymore...

Author's Response: Thanks for the reply and sorry! I hated doing that to Sam and it was hard for me to write, too. And as for whether Demetri did it or not, you'll know soon enough. It is a relief that Sam didn't die though. Thanks again for the reply and review! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 20:31
Chapter: Chapter 19: I Need Some Air

Awww I really like Demetri now. He's matured so much, he really cares for Genevieve and she needs him. Agreeing with Crystal99, can't believe I didn't like him at first! Almost like Demetri/Genevieve as much as Sam/Ivette now, mzap!

Really well-written chapter, as well. The midpoint! Wow. I'm loving this story so far, I'm sure the rest of it will be just as (g)awesome ;).

Author's Response: Amazing what a condemning contract can do, huh? Genevieve doesn't like to think that she has to depend on Demetri, but she's so glad she has him (though it is partly his fault for putting her in this mess). Actually, Chapter 20 is the midpoint, but I assure you that the rest will be just as (if not more) exciting; a lot of twists coming up. Thank you again for reading and reviewing this! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 20:24
Chapter: Chapter 18: Interrogating a Villain

Diana's prophecy is practically fulfilled. Gahh! I think it's a good thing that all the Aurors know, now. They know about the contract, at least.

Loving the story, as always, keep it up mzap!

Author's Response: It will be a while before Diana's prophecy is fully fulfilled. Yes, good the Aurors know but Harry was none too happy about his niece being raped, especially when she was under Demetri's care. I'm glad you're loving the story. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 20:16
Chapter: Chapter 17: Why Do They Have to Care So Much?

Ahh. Lost the baby. Though I have to agree with Crystal99, it might be for the best. Their child being brought up in an environment with parents under the contract and being double agents might not be the BEST thing in the world.

Author's Response: Sadly, it was probably best. It wasn't the right time for them and a baby would have definitely complicated things more. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 16: Reunited by Morning

Ahhh! Has the baby gone now? The miscarriage? What Diana saw? The dream? Everything? Ahhh! Poor Genevieve. Are you ever going to leave that woman alone, mzap?

This damn contract >.>

Author's Response: I'll leave Genevieve alone when this story is over, is that all right? Can't say much about the rest. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 20:03
Chapter: Chapter 15: ...

Wow. Poor Genevieve. I'm saying that for like half of the chapters at the moment! Demetri is being forced not to do anything, it's so unfair. Why can't Teddy just tell the Aurors about the contract already? GOSH! Teddy is frustrating me at the moment.

I can't remember what else I was going to say, so yeah.

Author's Response: Teddy can be very frustrating and it is completely killing Demetri at the inability to do anything at the moment. This will also come as a hard blow to Genevieve. A hard chapter for me to write, as I said before. Hate torturing my characters like this. :( Thank you for reading. :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 14: The Contract Detailed

AHHHHHH!! Why doesn't someone ask Demetri if he loves Genevieve, then he will say yes, then they'll all realise! That would be just too simple though, I guess...

At least the Aurors will know about the contract now, that's something, I guess...

Author's Response: Haha, that is a bit simple. That and no one will really believe Demetri because for the past 9 years, he and Genevieve have been in a lustful relationship so a simple "yes" would not be believed. Plus Teddy is convinced that Demetri doesn't love Genevieve/he's working for the other side. The contract will be known, but the question lies in whether everyone believes that Demetri loves Genevieve. Thank you for the read and review! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 13: The Manís a Bit Eccentric, Donít You Think?

Woahh, I hope Genevieve is safe. I really do. Ahhh why did Teddy do that? Little did he know he almost killed Genevieve, Merlin's beard.

Aha! A way to get out of the contract! They must get out of it ASAP! They MUST. Well that's what I think...:P

Author's Response: Oh, Teddy will know how much trouble he's caused eventually; Genevieve will make sure of that. :P And they have to find a way out, because Demetri won't be able to handle all the guilt. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 12: Murder by Night

Teddy is being nosy! Lol xD. I'm suspecting Harry suspects something is up that Demetri can't say, so is giving him specific tasks like that on purpose, methinks? Or something along those lines. Harry is quite clever though, methinks. S'yeah.

Ohh and I HOPE Teddy picks up on that, I really do. Really, really, really do.

Author's Response: Yes, Teddy is getting a tad obsessive of his paranoia. Like I said before, Harry trusts Demetri and he does suspect something, but won't say it outright. As for if Teddy will pick it up... we'll see. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 11: A Visit to the Rosiers and the Scare of My Life

Noooo they killings is ahhhhhh poor Genevieve having to witness that. Bet it scared her and Demetri, too.

Great how Freya took it! Leopald wasn't TOO bad, I guess. But like, the baby albums xD. Great work, keep it up!

Author's Response: It very much scared Demetri and Genevieve, seeing as they had never witnessed how powerful the contract can be. Freya is excited for a baby, seeing as she has someone else to care for now that Demetri is out of the house. Leopold is just disappointed it wasn't his. xD Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 10: Sympathy for Ivette

Noo. I love Ivette. You know I do. I feel sooo bad for her. And Demetri and Genevieve can't tell the Aurors anything, which makes them seem so mean, but ahh, they're just being forced into things and gahhhh there MUST be a way to break this alliance contract thingy. There MUST be...

Author's Response: I agree about poor Ivette. Shows that this mess is not only affecting Demetri and Genevieve, and how much restraint is on them. Thanks for the review. :)

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