Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 05/23/10 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 29: Bad Boy, My Ass
every time you post a new chapter, it brightens up my day hehe. i love thefact that genevieve and demetri are back to their old selves again...despite demetri being a little soft but it's cute!
Author's Response: Thanks, karamarie! I'm glad to hear that. :) I love writing Demetri and Genevieve as their old selves, and I liked being able to do that here... they need a bit of rest from what's happened. ;) Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 05/21/10 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 29: Bad Boy, My Ass
Hahahaha I loved this chapter xD Sam and Ivette, their kids, Harry showing up, D/G.. just everything. I really enjoyed it :P
Awww I'd marry Demetri. It's a shame Genevieve doesn't want to... but at least she's considering the "children" factor lol
Favourite quote: "I remembered that Andromeda Black was blasted off because she married Ted Tonks, who had Nymphadora Tonks, who married Remus Lupin and created that very sad fellow over there." lmao!!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, TarynSage. I'm glad you enjoyed it. xD I'd marry Demetri, too, but Genevieve has her principles in order. She's still iffy on the children, but she's already been pregnant, so she can't exactly say 'no' to Demetri now.... I love that quote too. :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 05/20/10 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Truth Behind It All
Ok ok, so things were a bit calmer in this chapter. Grr. (I still have memories from the previous one Lol)
Anyway, I love the Demetri vs. Teddy part. They should bicker more often, in my humble opinion, because they're hilarious xD
And whoa, where did Harry come from??
Author's Response: *innocent look* Thanks for the review. :) Yes, Demetri vs. Teddy is always so much fun, almost as fun as Genevieve vs. Teddy (which there are some good ones coming up). And sorry, should have explained this better. Harry was summoned by Ivette, after Genevieve came in; he wanted to be notified when Genevieve found out the truth. Thanks again for reading! :)
Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 05/20/10 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 27: That Lying Bastard
Alright, so before I move on to the next chapter, I believe I have a rant pending.
How could you do this to me!?!?!? I was already getting over his death, you! I'm actually not sure if I want to throttle you, or him. While it was your idea, he pretty much carried it out... so now I'm at a loss. Don't get me wrong, I'm happy he's alive after all but goddammit was the suffering you put us through necessary???
(Lmao there you go. There's the violent rant I should have written before :P I'm checking out the companion piece soon xD)
Author's Response: Hahaha. Thank you, TarynSage; I've been waiting for this. Lmao. Yes, the suffering was necessary... well, think about how Genevieve felt! Finding out the love of your life lied to you about being dead... and with her attitude... oi. Lol, well, thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 05/17/10 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Truth Behind It All
well it's good that teddy is now involved in the secret. it was an ingenious idea for genevieve to fake her own death, though the pain that the people who don't know the truth will go through shall be horrible. amazing chapter as usual. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Alice! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'm glad you thought the plan with Genevieve was ingenious. :P Definitely people who aren't in on the plan will be very worried and sad, but of course, this situation won't be forever. Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Josephine Granger
Date: 05/17/10 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Truth Behind It All
I liked this chapter a lot. I think it's a good idea for Genevieve to pretend to commit suicide so that she has Nathaniel off her back. Though how long until he finds out...
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Josephine! (btw, love the name, as you can tell... one of Ivette's children is named that ;)) Yes, definitely good to keep Nathaniel away, and it'll only be a matter of time when he finds out about Genevieve and Demetri, or rather... when he finds them.... I'm glad you liked the chapter and I promise to post more soon! :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 05/17/10 0:10
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Truth Behind It All
i don't know why you aren't satisfied with this chapter. it's good! i love how genevieve and demeteri act towards lupin. it's quite comical hehe.
and i apologize for bugging you about updating. i completely understand the pressure of tests. not fun. but still can't wait for more updates!
Author's Response: Thanks for the reply! :) That's not a problem. I was planning on updating soon anyways, but your review helped me make time to do it. :P That's one thing I love about this fic, the interactions between Demetri, Genevieve, and Lupin. So fun writing it. Thanks again for the review and I promise I'll post the next one soon. :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 05/12/10 1:38
Chapter: Chapter 27: That Lying Bastard
i don't mean to be a total pain in the arse but i am dying for an update!!!
Author's Response: Sorry! The past few weeks I've been studying for midterms and finals and I only recently finishing moving. I'll update as soon as I can. :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 04/19/10 1:07
Chapter: Chapter 27: That Lying Bastard
yay! just what i needed on a crummy night. i was just about to head to bed when i thought i would check one last time to see if you updated. i'm very glad i did! as always, i eagerly await the next wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, karamarie, and I'm glad this was able to brighten up your day (night?). I'll be sure to update again soon. :)
Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 04/18/10 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 27: That Lying Bastard
Sorry I wasn't able to review for the last chapter, but it was very good. But I have to say you are horrible for doing this to your readers. I about cried when I thought he died and then about had a heart attack when I found out Demetri was alive. I have to say that this story is amazing with all this rollar coasterness. Once again, I love the story and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, Alice! It's not a problem that you didn't review last time. It was cruel, but it was interesting to see the reactions to all this. I'm glad you've been enjoying this! Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 03/27/10 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 26: Arising Suspicions
This chapter was.... intriguing.... The change in Genevieve's character is puzzling. If Nathaniel was indeed there with her, I wouldn't have expected her to come out of the ordeal like that.
And then, why is she suddenly smiling at Felix and wanting to visit Ivette??? I agree with Teddy, something's wrong. Oooh dear... Nathaniel what did you do!?
Author's Response: Lol, thanks, TarynSage. Hmm... it is interesting that Genevieve did change character so quickly... you might want to look into what things could happen that could do that. ;) Thanks so much for the review! :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 03/27/10 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 26: Arising Suspicions
yay!!! i feel so much better reading this chapter in whole finally...not just the excerpt anymore. this is such an addicting story! i anxiously await the next chapter...and i will keep my fingers crossed that you aren't too busy so it will come out sooner ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, karamarie. :) Yes, I'm sure it makes a lot more sense now and I'm glad you like this story so much! I'm going to try very hard not to let the work overwhelm me, it just gets crazy at times.... Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 03/09/10 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 25: I Want Him Back
It was sweet of Demetri to leave Genevieve a letter. This was such a sad chapter, but beautifully written. I especially liked the dream at the beginning. It made the rest of chapter more poignant. It was nice to see a little of the old Genevieve at the end. I enjoyed reading this. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal. I'm glad you liked the chapter. The "dream" at the beginning was more of a memory, as I recall; Genevieve just can't seem to escape any of it. The end bit was fun; Demetri may be dead, but Genevieve still knows how to take care of herself. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 03/09/10 1:32
Chapter: Chapter 25: I Want Him Back
i've been checking every day for an update. what a wonderful way to end my night with a new update! it was proper mint. i will admit i had trouble reading demetri's note...so sad. and again i will await with eagerness for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I apologize for not getting this chapter out faster; things are still a bit crazy. *sigh* Oh, Demetri; so sweet. I'm glad you liked this chapter and I promise the next one will come sooner. Thanks for reading and replying! :)
Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 03/01/10 1:12
Chapter: Chapter 24: The Tragedy of Genevieve Weasley
I absolutely adore your story! I've been glued to my computer this whole day reading every chapter. I am anxiously anticipating the next one. Oh please hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this and I promise a new chapter will be coming soon. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 02/11/10 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 24: The Tragedy of Genevieve Weasley
I have a question. If you don't want to answer it on here because you don't want to give anything away you can email me. The question is, Is Demetri really dead? I'm thinking maybe he went into hiding and the man that was killed in the last chapter wasn't really him, but someone who took polyjuice potion to look like him. Just a theory of mine. Harry didn't seem too upset by the news of Demetri's death. Maybe him and Demetri had planned something. Anyway, poor Genevieve. I feel so bad for her. I'm wondering who the visitor is that is staying with Sam and Ivette. I enjoyed the chapter as always. Can't wait for the next one. Nicely done. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the reply! That is a really interesting theory, but as far as anyone's concerned, Demetri is dead. :( As for the visitor, you will find out soon enough. And I do feel horrible for Genevieve; so much in a short amount of time. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 01/31/10 9:56
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him
No! How could you kill Demetri? You are evil I tell you. Lol, just joking. It was such a sad chapter, but written beautifully as only you can write. I won't hold Demetri's death against you. We writer's do what we have to do. I promise to stick with you until the end. Poor Genevieve. At least she and Demetri had one last night together. Looking forward to your next chapter. Nicely done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Crystal. Glad to hear that you'll stick with this story. And it was nice that they had one last night, before this happened. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 01/30/10 12:37
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him
Are you serious?
ARE YOU SERIOUS!?!?
D:
I swear, I did not see that one coming. When you told me Demetri wouldn't be in the sequel, I never assumed this!! Omg Genevieve's free but you killed him!! D: Trust Nathaniel to double cross people like that... I'm in shock
And it happened so fast! No one had a chance to react. I'm hoping this is some kind of trick, but somehow, I think not...... )':
Aside from that, well written. I know what it's like to lose your beloved, though not to the same degree, and that's pretty much the way it feels. Nicely captured. Now you better not leave us hanging on this!!
Author's Response: I know, I know. Yeah, Nathaniel's been wanting Demetri dead for some time now and he finally chose to go through with it. And it did happen quickly, which is the sad part. And thanks for the compliments on the writing style; it was hard to imagine exactly how Genevieve would react given that she almost never cries and she's never had to deal with something like this. Thank you for reading and replying. :)
Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/30/10 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him
HOW COULD YOU?
Seriously.
They were my second favourite pair! Your favourite!
THEY WERE SUCH A NICE COUPLE
Author's Response: *cough* Er... again, it killed me to do this, but it was necessary. I'm sorry. Thanks for reading and replying! :)
Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 01/29/10 22:57
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him
OH MY GODRIC!!! How could you kill Demetri? This is horrible, I wanna cry. Poor Genevieve.
Sorry I didn't comment last time, I didn't get a chance too.
Author's Response: Thanks for replying. Um... well... it wasn't easy, I can tell you that much. I hated doing it, but it was necessary. Sorry. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
