Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 14:50
Chapter: Chapter 27: That Lying Bastard

I knew it ! I knew he wasn't dead. This was excellently written, mzap. I have to say this is my favorite chapter so far. The plan Demetri came up with was brilliant. Well done. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal! I'm glad you liked this chapter so much and Demetri's plan. Hopefully, it'll work. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 26: Arising Suspicions

I have a feeling Genevieve spent the night with Demetri and that he is the guest staying with her sister. I've always had a feeling that he wasn't really dead. I guess I should read the next chapter to find out. :)

Author's Response: Nice guess, Crystal! Yes, I guess it would be nice to have Demetri alive again. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 08/22/10 21:19
Chapter: Epilogue

Amazing end to the story. For some reason my reviews for the last 2 didn't show up much to my annoyance, but they were all great. Loved how they met up with the family at King's Cross, and how Teddy and Hamish's kids got together. Hopefully Fauna will end up with some little brothers and sisters, and I can honestly say I'm not surprised that Demetri and Genevieve didn't get married. I CANNOT wait for the sequel, no doubt it will be as amazing as this one. Great writings as usual. I shall keep an eye open for Playing With Demons.
Until then,
Alice Sneak.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Alice! Pity the reviews didn't show up but I'm glad this one did. :) The pairing with Teddy and Hamish's kids was something I had in my head for quite some time, and I definitely like it. I don't know about Fauna ending up with more siblings... I feel that Demetri or at least Genevieve would be a little more careful after her. ;) I'm excited to post the sequel too and it'll be up in a couple weeks! Thanks again for all your support and I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 08/22/10 10:12
Chapter: Epilogue

(Mwaahahahah I knew that about Fauna!! xD)

Aww I love how Genevieve's and Demetri's relationship matured, but they're still like their old selves. Also love the idea of all the kids being friends, despite Genevieve not being too close to the family.

I loved, loved, loved the epilogue! Everything about it was just great: the characters, the settings, the ending, the emotions (Libby and Felix lmao)

I soooo want to read Playing with Demons already :P can't wait!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Taryn! I definitely love that aspect about Demetri and Genevieve, especially since things weren't going to be the same for the two of them after all that. And yes, Genevieve isn't exactly thrilled that Fauna enjoys spending so much time with the family (dragging her along), but Demetri kindly reminds her that Fauna needs it. I'm glad you liked this epilogue and I'm also excited for you all to read 'Playing with Daemons'. Thanks for keeping up with this! :)

Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 08/15/10 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 39: My Life, One Year Afterwards

this was such a heartwarming chapter. i couldn't help but smile. your story has been quite amazing, truly.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, karamarie! :) I'm so glad you've enjoyed this and I can't thank you enough for your wonderful reviews. :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 08/11/10 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 39: My Life, One Year Afterwards

I knew it!! Mwahahaha I knew it was Fauna! xD how could it not be? Lol

What I didn't expect was Genevieve keeping her from Demetri. I can see Demetri being a bit upset over that... but let that come later xD right now he's where he belongs :P

I have the same question as Demetri.. just when did Genevieve get pregnant? (I am so going to check our timeline!! lmao)

I loved the chapter :) nice ending to such a dramatic story. Happy in a way, but we know better don't we? lol can't wait for the epilogue!!

Author's Response: hahahahaha, thanks, Taryn! You were just waiting for me to introduce her into the story, right? Demetri would be slightly upset about not knowing, but he knows Genevieve did it for the best of reasons and right now, his concern is being with his daughter. I know I already told you when Genevieve got pregnant, but I'll say it again here for anyone else who is curious (should put it at the beginning of the epilogue too). Fauna was conceived several nights before the big fight with the Purity; it was too early to tell of Genevieve's pregnancy when she was at St. Mungo's and even then it would have been confused with the symptoms of the potion. Genevieve found out of her pregnancy while Demetri was on trial and knowing that the trial wouldn't go well, she decided to keep Fauna a secret. I'm glad you enjoyed this and I promise to post the epilogue soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 08/08/10 10:42
Chapter: Chapter 38: Memorable Encounters

I can think of just one memory that wouldn't have much to do with the trial, the kind of memory that slips in ;), but Demetri should leave it just to annoy the judges xD

Poor Demetri.. I hope this plan works :S

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Taryn! :) Hahaha, Demetri will be leaving that memory out... it honestly did slip in! And I don't think annoying the judges would be the best approach... if Demetri wants to get out. Thanks again!

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 08/08/10 0:43
Chapter: Chapter 38: Memorable Encounters

ooooooooooooooohhhhhh....please let him get out!!!! I sooooooooo want him to end up back with Genevieve. I have said this in previous chapters, that i was reluctant to read this story at first, but i am truly glad that i have. Keep up the good work XD

Author's Response: Thanks, grangergal101! I'm glad you're enjoying this, and we'll have to see if Demetri gets out, won't we? Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 08/03/10 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 37: Being With My Family, After All This Time

wow now I know what you meant when you mentioned the long chapters hahahahaha

I miss Demetri!! it's incredible that it has been so long already... I wonder how he's doing? I suppose he's not doing as bad as he would if Dementors still guarded the prison. But still...

And Genevieve.. lol she has to lighten up to her nieces and nephew xD probably wont any time soon, but maybe, one day... can she visit Demetri??

Uuu Nathaniel on trial. Yes please :D

Author's Response: Thanks, TarynSage! Haha, the next chapter is far longer. It is hard to see that he's been gone for so long; don't worry, you'll get to see him in the next chapter. As for Genevieve, there is actually a reason she refuses to visit Demetri, something you'll find out soon enough. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 07/28/10 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 37: Being With My Family, After All This Time

Another great 2 chapters. I love that they are trying to get an appeal for Demetri, hopefully that judge will get what's coming to him. I'm also glad that Genevieve is getting along more with her family. More chapters please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alice! I hope for the best for Demetri, too. Genevieve is getting better with her family, but I don't expect her to come to any family reunions any time soon... lol. Thanks for reading and I promise to update soon! :)

Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 07/25/10 5:05
Chapter: Chapter 36: One Last Chance

how exciting. that's a brilliant idea! even i didn't see that coming hehe. i can't believe it's so close to the end however.

Author's Response: Thanks, karamarie! And hopefully the plan works, right? I'm going to hate to see this go, too. But thank you for sticking around and reading this! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 07/19/10 13:48
Chapter: Chapter 35: Just When I Thought Life Was Going to Get Better…

The trial was a sham. What is up with that judge? Poor Demetri getting thrown in Azkaban for life, and poor Genevieve for not being able to have him out with her. I just hope that something will happen that will get him out and hopefully he won't be in there for life. Hint hint, nudge nudge. Another great chapter as usual mzap, I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alice! :D I know its horrible that Demetri and Genevieve have been separated, but hopefully something will be found so that the two may be together again. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 07/16/10 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 35: Just When I Thought Life Was Going to Get Better…

ooooohhhhh poor Demitri. Please get him out of there!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will do my best. Thanks for reading, grangergal! :)

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 07/16/10 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 35: Just When I Thought Life Was Going to Get Better…

Absolutely awesome - just read the whole story in one sitting - please, please, please, more soon! Very well written, excellent characterizations. Love Remus & Tonks still alive. Love Demtri & Genevieve! Best OC ever!!

Author's Response: Thank you, decdraft! :) I'm glad you liked this so much, and wow, all in one sitting? Thank you so much for the compliments and I promise to update soon. And thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 07/16/10 9:57
Chapter: Chapter 35: Just When I Thought Life Was Going to Get Better…

Where is Albus Dumbledore when you need him!?!? (He is only excused because he's dead)

Nuuu Demetri! First you kill him, now you lock him away? My, you love torturing your characters, don't you? Lol

I hate cocky judges and attorneys. But was Diana really just trying to win the case for herself, or was that just Genevieve's perspective?

More please!

Author's Response: Thanks, TarynSage! Yes, I know I'm cruel, but things will get better soon... we all hope. About Diana, as much as she'd like to admit that she was mostly doing it out of the kindness of her heart for Demetri, part of her was really wanting to win this case for herself. She has a bit of pride to keep up. ;) However, that didn't stop her from defending Demetri in the best way she could. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: TarynSage
Date: 07/14/10 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

Genevieve is going crazy!! O.o I agree with Teddy, she needs a vacation. So free Demetri and send them to Mexico!!! :D

I feel sorry for Teddy x] he was just trying to help, and he did get Diana on board, despite Demetri almost killing her brother.

Everyone help Demetri now!!

Author's Response: Thanks, TarynSage! Yes, I'll agree Genevieve is a tad... emotional right now. She definitely needs a vacation, but I think Mexico's a little far for her to travel. ;) Visiting her family might be better for her. As for Teddy, well Genevieve wasn't exactly going to show her gratitude quite so politely, especially with Teddy wanting some sort of recognition for it. Diana and Ivette are two women not quite so pleased with Demetri for what he did to Sam, but they realized (grudgingly) that it was for the best and that he wasn't really trying to kill Sam. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 07/13/10 4:45
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

AWWW!!!!!! OMG!!! I wan to punch the judge (if he were real). Pleas update soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, grangergal101! :) Things are about to become much worse with the judge, as you're going to see. I'll update as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 07/12/10 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

That was one crazy chapter I have to say. I liked how it was told in Teddy's POV and not Genevieve. It's always good to hear from Teddy. I'm glad he's helping Demetri by getting his friend to defend him, and all I can hope is that he gets off. *hint hint?* Thanks for another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alice! I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you liked it from Teddy's perspective. I think you could feel more of Genevieve's anger that way, right? Now that Teddy understands what's going on, he's a little more willing to help. We'll see if Demetri gets off. ;) Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 07/12/10 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

i love your characterization of genevieve. she's so tough! i love the strong heroine. but at least teddy tried to help for once hehe. can't wait to read what's coming next.

Author's Response: Thanks, karamarie! :) I'll admit that Genevieve is one of my favorite characters and I particularly like her in this chapter. She knows how to hold her ground and say what she needs to say. Teddy will be more helpful this time around, now that he knows what's going on. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Alice Sneak
Date: 07/10/10 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 33: My Revival

Glad to see that Genevieve is okay, and the Contract is destroyed. But yet you torture us with that ending? You are a horrible author for continuing to do this to your readers. Review soon so that we can find out what the heck is going to happen to Demetri.

Author's Response: Thanks, Alice. :) I promise to post as soon as possible and I'm sorry you think that of me. :P Of course I can't so easily give them a happy ending without clearing up the mess afterwards. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

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